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| 20 Jul 2011 07:25 AM |
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12:00am. A sudden jolt woke me up in my bed. I finally felt my body. I sat up slowly and saw the sunlight through the blinds. I got out of bed and was about to get my fresh clothes from the closet when a little whisper in my head said "Stay away." I had a cold chill run through my spine. So I just turned, walked to the door, and went down stairs. Normally I wake up to the sound of breakfast being cooked, but this morning was like no other. It felt dead, empty, deserted.
I couldn't put my finger on it, but for some reason last night felt real. I know it was just a nightmare, but still, everything felt so vivid and it was just shoved it in my face. I quickly forgot about it. I wasn't really hungry, so I decided to watch some TV. I grabbed the remote off the coffee table and turned the TV on. But it wasn't your normal flash of light, it was more like a slow rise in brightness along with the rise of sound. I was trying to change the channel, but nothing. It was just static.
To make things worse, the sound was still rising in volume. There was a raspy voice screaming in the back of all the noise that just made things worse. I could hear it like I did last night. I tried to press the mute button, but nothing. I got scared, and irritated to the point that I smashed the remote into the TV. The screen went black. But a weird black some came out of it. It kept coming out and moved towards the coffee table. It stop pouring out of the TV, and materialized on the Coffee Table. It was that black book from the dream.
The chills went through me like a lighting bolt. It hit me like a train, the reality of the fact that last night was completely real. The closet, the book, the creature. I sat their, solid as a rock as if I had looked into meduzas eyes. I looked at the book. Something in my head told me to grab it. I picked it up and opened it. I didn't want to read it what so ever. I knew nothing good would come out of it, I knew I would be in trouble again, and I knew I would get hurt worse than last night. I started to read the old, brown, water damaged papers.
I could barely read what looked like chicken scratch. "The reader of this book is no longer in reality. You are inside your head. I control you and what happens. You have to follow my directions in order to escape. You can't wake up, because you are not asleep. Listen to me, and I might spare you."
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| 20 Jul 2011 07:31 AM |
Nice! Next time use capitals if you mention names though. It was bugging me when I was reading it.
9.6/10
You can earn the last .4 points by the last part and perfecting the whole story on 1 thread. |
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