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Re: Sooooo, here's an update on Sparten's bonus.

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Sparten171bonus is not online. Sparten171bonus
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18 Jul 2011 08:35 AM
A random day, pretty much like any other on that pointless planet we like to call Equestria. Rainbow Dash was off being random, she had nothing better to do for the day besides kill time so she went off exploring by herself. Buuuuut, almost immediately after wandering of the trails, she was knocked out.

Some time later, she awoke in an unfamiliar place, a small bedroom. She thought, could this be a dream? No, it couldn't be, it felt too real to be a dream. She looked down, seeing a small table below her, and a few metal braces that locked her firm in place on it. "What the heck? Why am I locked to a table?" she asked herself. Then she looked around the room, pictures of herself were everywhere in it. She felt disturbed, but also kind of happy, it did remind her of her friends back on Equestria, but it wasn't that much of a relief to her situation.

Then suddenly, the door opened, and in walked sparten. "Oh hi there, I see you've woken up..." he said to Dash, smiling.
"Wha-... what do yo-... you want w-w-with me?", a stuttery Dashy asked him, chills running down her spine, and shaking in her braces.
"Oh, nothing special really. I feel I may have given a wrong impression with that last thing I said, I don't intend to do anything "bad" to you if that's what you assume."
"Really?", Dash said, her face slowly turning into a smile.
"Nope."

Dash's smile turned back into a frown, and her mind began to ponder what he could possibly want to do with her. Kill her? Torture her? Make her his slave? All of those questions raced through her head, and she didn't want, nor really intend to find out. She began to try and break free, and although she knew it was a pretty fruitless attempt, she still wanted to go for it. She began to squirm around in her braces, but with no luck.

"Oh Dashy, don't waste your energy. You and I both know you couldn't hope to break free of your braces over there." sparten told her.

She continued to squirm around, despite sparten telling her the truth, but this did nothing.

"Just stop Dashy, you know you won't break free, those braces are not easy to break." sparten once again told her.

Now she began frantically moving around and flapping her wings, giving it everything she had, her heartrate increased dramatically and she sweat like crazy, but her braces stayed firm, and she was growing tired. She gave it one last try, she squirmed, pulled, and flapped as much as possible, but to no avail. She was completely tired out. She began slowly catching her breath.

"Alright then. Now that you're tired out, it's time to do what I've intended to do for awhile now."

Sparten now began to approach her, and Dash, knowing she now had next to no chance of fighing him off, or any means of reasoning with him quietly sighed, and prepared for the worst. Sparten began to remove her braces, first one, then two, three and then the last. He picked Dash up and carried her towards his bedside, putting her down on it.

"Stay, don't try to escape, all possible exits are blocked off and you won't be getting out of here unless I allow it." sparten told her.
And then she passed out.

She awoke a few minutes later. Sparten was gone, she hadn't the slightest idea where he went. She walked around the bedroom to kill time. The unfamiliar pitter patter of rain against the glass intrigued her, she had only seen rain a few times before. She pressed her face to the glass and stared out into the rainy night time sky. She heard the door open behind her, sparten was back.

"Oh hi again Dashy, did you miss me?" he asked rhetorically.

Dash just continued to stare out into the dark sky, tears began to form in her eyes, first one and then two... and then she began to sob.

"Oh what's wrong Dashy?" sparten asked, walking over to her at the window
"Nothing." Dash replied, still sobbing and sniffling.
"Come on, just tell me."
"Oh, fine. ...I miss Equestria. I want to go back there." she told him.
"Oh, well don't worry. I intend to send you back later."

Dash was still sad though, and she still had tears in her eyes.

"...Hey Dashy, I know what'll cheer you up." sparten told her.
"What?" she asked.
"Go sit over on the bed, I'll be riiight back." sparten said enthusiastically, sprinting out the door.

Dash went over to the bed and sat down. She was still quite tired, but she didn't want to fall asleep and dissapoint sparten, he seemed nice, even though she had been chained down by him. She thought of life back home while she waited, she was sure she would be asked where she'd been, since she knew it'd probably been hours since she was taken away.

It was now that the door opened again. Dash looked behind her, and once again, in walked sparten, but this time was different from the others. This time he was naked. Dash knew why almost instantly, she began to think to herself, should she fight it? Should she just go with it? She didn't have that much time to think, but had it thought out from the start. She knew it'd be pointless to try and resist.
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astrosimi is not online. astrosimi
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18 Jul 2011 08:37 AM
Awww yeah.
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RainbowDash101 is not online. RainbowDash101
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18 Jul 2011 08:37 AM
GOSH JUST GET ON WITH IT
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astrosimi is not online. astrosimi
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18 Jul 2011 08:37 AM
>GOSH JUST GET ON WITH IT

what
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18 Jul 2011 08:38 AM
This makes no sense
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18 Jul 2011 08:39 AM
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Shadowman104 is not online. Shadowman104
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18 Jul 2011 08:39 AM
AWW YEAAAH.

for some reason, I find these quite amusing.
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astrosimi is not online. astrosimi
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18 Jul 2011 08:39 AM
>This makes no sense

As far as it goes in my head, this makes total sense.
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Sparten171bonus is not online. Sparten171bonus
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18 Jul 2011 08:39 AM
@thats
it's not supposed to

@dash
well i haven't finished it
so i can't
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astrosimi is not online. astrosimi
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18 Jul 2011 08:45 AM
I'm going to bump this.
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Beatlesgirl01234 is not online. Beatlesgirl01234
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18 Jul 2011 08:56 AM
Interesting story...
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coollittlemidgetlol is not online. coollittlemidgetlol
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18 Jul 2011 08:58 AM
lol reported

"7. No inappropriate references.
There’s no question that Internet is full of degrading inappropriate material and comments. Roblox is fully G-rated, it must be KEPT that way. This will get you instantly banned. If you are not sure if the thing you want to talk about it okay to talk about, PM a mod and ask.

This means no talking about anything R-rated, drugs, or any dating topic (including furries)."
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Sparten171bonus is not online. Sparten171bonus
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18 Jul 2011 09:00 AM
@littlemidget
um
i don't really care
i have like 2,000 alts anyways
kind of like you do
lol
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coollittlemidgetlol is not online. coollittlemidgetlol
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18 Jul 2011 09:05 AM
PWNED
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Dawg925 is not online. Dawg925
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18 Jul 2011 09:52 AM
AWWWWW YEEEEEAAAAAAAAH
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18 Jul 2011 09:59 AM
That was the Build-up, not the Bonus. Do a better one next time!
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starwars343 is not online. starwars343
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18 Jul 2011 09:59 AM
THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dawg925 is not online. Dawg925
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18 Jul 2011 10:00 AM
I wasn't on OT for a while, so I don't even know who Sparten is, but I still am completely amused by this.
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Merple6015 is not online. Merple6015
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18 Jul 2011 10:07 AM
Get on with the juicy part. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME.
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18 Jul 2011 10:27 AM
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Sparten171bonus is not online. Sparten171bonus
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18 Jul 2011 10:29 AM
1. if you want it to be good, shut up and wait it out
2. this stuff takes time
3. it's my first legit bonus so it's incredibly awkward and hard to write this stuff out, and i havent slept in over a day
so yeah
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