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| 15 Jul 2011 10:50 AM |
Roblox War I has lasted for months now. What began as a VAC upper hand has now shifted to the superclans. With Swampy Moon surrounded it is being attacked around the clock. Both sides have lost many, both sides have heros. Only heros survive and die, because all soldiers are heros.
Our last forces made it at the drop zone. It was time to take Swampy Moon Outpost once and for all. We showed ourselves and the first of us were mowed down by turrents. We ran to the wall and climbed it. You could hear the clanking of metal up top. Suddenly when I made it up a Vaktovian popped out. My sword made short work of him. I could tell he was a drone. Sniper shots were everywhere. Battle cries never stopped. Suddenly I felt a pain on my leg. My first thought was "I'm hit!"
"Medic!" I cried.
I fell and saw all the troops run passed me. It was all a blur. Then a medic came. After a while I could see strait, but I couldn't walk. A Vaktovian fell from the tower.
"We've won!" I heard.
Yes! But then, an RAT scout picked me up. Get out of here! I was confused. Then I saw a VAC bomber. There going to bomb this place to bits!
Part 2
The bombs came down they didn't hit the base! They hit our reinforcements! Suddenly Vaktovian jet troopers came down.
"Take cover!"
The medic gave me a healing implant that speeded up my healing process to a few hours. I took out my pistol and shot toward the sky. A jetpack blew up in mid air. Then they returned fire. I saw 2 conscripts get hit. Then I saw a coordinator fall, then a scout and a guard. The sky went glowing with explosions and out-of-control jetpacks. The the first Vakatovians landed.
Part 3
The Vaktovians gained ground. I hid in the shadows. Suddenly 2 Vaktovians charged in.
"What is going on?" Said the first.
"Looks like we landed at the wrong place, right time!"
"Orders?"
"Finish the RATs off."
I hit the wall. One Vaktovian grabbed me with his mechanical arm. He took out his sword. I shot him with my pistol and aimed at the second.
-click-
I'm out of amo!
The Vaktovian pulled out his carbine and aimed straight at me.
BANG!
The medic charged in the room and the Vaktovian fell.
"Are you alright?"
I stood up. The healing implant worked. "Yes, let's get in the tower."
Part 4
I could hear the sounds. "Fall back!", "Medic!", "I'm pinned down!".
There was nothing we could do. We were pinned down at the tower and looseing ground fast. As far as I could see the jet troopers were still falling from the sky. A Vaktovian charged up to me, took out his knife, and swung at me. I dodged it and took out mine. Soldiers from both sides gathered around me. He swung and missed. I kicked him and he fell back. More Vaktovians were coming. The remianing RATs fleed further in the tower. A supervisor went up to me.
"Get to the flag room. We must…" He was shot.
"They have the base surrounded!" Said a conscript, "No turning back now!"
We ran to the flag room. The three of us (me, the medic, and the conscript).
We suddenly realized something.
"There scaling the tower!"
The first Vaktovian heads popped up.
Part 5
The Vaktovians took the flag room and fired at us. We fell back to the armory. They followed us.
BAM, BAM, BAM!
A scout fell. The maze behind us was like a death trap. We didn't know where the dead ends were. We finally reached one.
"Were trapped!" shouted the last supervisor.
"Keep firing!" screamed a conscript.
The Vaktovians ran in. One hit me on the face with the back of his gun and I blacked out...
Written by ComanderCodyPWT Parts 1-4 edited and revised by Robloxrulez914 Part 5 edited and revised by ComanderCodyPWT |
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| 15 Jul 2011 10:57 AM |
| Put me in it :D ~RAT Honor Supervisor. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 02:21 PM |
Roblox War I has lasted for months now. What began as a VAC upper hand has now shifted to the superclans. With Swampy Moon surrounded it is being attacked around the clock. Both sides have lost many, both sides have heros. Only heros survive and die, because all soldiers are heros.
Our last forces made it at the drop zone. It was time to take Swampy Moon Outpost once and for all. We showed ourselves and the first of us were mowed down by turrents. We ran to the wall and climbed it. You could hear the clanking of metal up top. Suddenly when I made it up a Vaktovian popped out. My sword made short work of him. I could tell he was a drone. Sniper shots were everywhere. Battle cries never stopped. Suddenly I felt a pain on my leg. My first thought was "I'm hit!"
"Medic!" I cried.
I fell and saw all the troops run passed me. It was all a blur. Then a medic came. After a while I could see strait, but I couldn't walk. A Vaktovian fell from the tower.
"We've won!" I heard.
Yes! But then, an RAT scout picked me up. Get out of here! I was confused. Then I saw a VAC bomber. There going to bomb this place to bits!
Part 2
The bombs came down they didn't hit the base! They hit our reinforcements! Suddenly Vaktovian jet troopers came down.
"Take cover!"
The medic gave me a healing implant that speeded up my healing process to a few hours. I took out my pistol and shot toward the sky. A jetpack blew up in mid air. Then they returned fire. I saw 2 conscripts get hit. Then I saw a coordinator fall, then a scout and a guard. The sky went glowing with explosions and out-of-control jetpacks. The the first Vakatovians landed.
Part 3
The Vaktovians gained ground. I hid in the shadows. Suddenly 2 Vaktovians charged in.
"What is going on?" Said the first.
"Looks like we landed at the wrong place, right time!"
"Orders?"
"Finish the RATs off."
I hit the wall. One Vaktovian grabbed me with his mechanical arm. He took out his sword. I shot him with my pistol and aimed at the second.
-click-
I'm out of amo!
The Vaktovian pulled out his carbine and aimed straight at me.
BANG!
The medic charged in the room and the Vaktovian fell.
"Are you alright?"
I stood up. The healing implant worked. "Yes, let's get in the tower."
Part 4
I could hear the sounds. "Fall back!", "Medic!", "I'm pinned down!".
There was nothing we could do. We were pinned down at the tower and looseing ground fast. As far as I could see the jet troopers were still falling from the sky. A Vaktovian charged up to me, took out his knife, and swung at me. I dodged it and took out mine. Soldiers from both sides gathered around me. He swung and missed. I kicked him and he fell back. More Vaktovians were coming. The remianing RATs fleed further in the tower. A supervisor went up to me.
"Get to the flag room. We must…" He was shot.
"They have the base surrounded!" Said a conscript, "No turning back now!"
We ran to the flag room. The three of us (me, the medic, and the conscript).
We suddenly realized something.
"There scaling the tower!"
The first Vaktovian heads popped up.
Part 5
The Vaktovians took the flag room and fired at us. We fell back to the armory. They followed us.
BAM, BAM, BAM!
A scout fell. The maze behind us was like a death trap. We didn't know where the dead ends were. We finally reached one.
"Were trapped!" shouted the last supervisor (who was Robloxrulez914).
"Keep firing!" screamed a conscript.
The Vaktovians ran in. One hit me on the face with the back of his gun and I blacked out...
Written by ComanderCodyPWT Parts 1-4 edited and revised by Robloxrulez914 Part 5 (previously) edited and revised by ComanderCodyPWT (then Robloxrulez914) |
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| 15 Jul 2011 03:50 PM |
| I have a special place if you want to be in it in what might be part 10. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 04:04 PM |
Part 6
I woke up. I saw bodies all around me. Nobody alive was there though. My head hurt. Suddenly I heard walking. I scrammed in the air vents. I peered in the room. 2 RATs were captured by 4 Vakatoins. I jumped out of the air vents, knifed a VAK, and shot the other 3 with my cyclon. The 2 RATs picked up the Vakatoin's SC-11's.
"What in the world happend in the passed... who knows how long?!?" I asked.
"Were spread all over the place, most of us are either dead or captured. There are still groups of resistance though." Answered one of the who was a scout.
"Did you try contacting the outside?"
"No use, they have the entire base jammed. Nothing would get out."
"Follow me then." I said.
We crawled through the air vents and saw what we were up against.
"Out of all divisions, how come we have to deal with the Vakatoin Royal Guards!!!" |
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| 15 Jul 2011 04:26 PM |
May I please be in Part 10? I love these so much.
-The Fool |
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| 15 Jul 2011 06:40 PM |
| epic. moar. and stop switching threads please. it gets confusing. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 07:07 PM |
Sorry.
I'm wrighting part 7! |
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| 15 Jul 2011 07:32 PM |
Part 7
Bang!
One of the Royal Guards was shot dead. The other pulled out a knife and charge straight at me. I got my pistol pointed it at him and… click. I forgot to reload it!
CRASH!
I flew in the air, hit the wall, and I was sure that was the end. However, one of the RAT members I rescued put in a round of SC-11 right through him. He then pulled out a slicing chip from the Vakatoin's belt.
"This should get us through a few doors."
"What were they protecting?"
"Looks like it's in that door."
I reloaded my pistol and he sliced through the door. Two Royal Guards turned around, but fell to the ground before they knew what was going on.
"This is the main computer!"
The RAT hacked into it.
"What does it say?"
"This base is storing large amounts of TC-57."
"What's that?" I asked
"It's a rare gas, only found on certain planets."
"So?"
He turned around "It's highly explosive. One spark can blow up half a room."
"Bingo."
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| 15 Jul 2011 08:56 PM |
Part 8
I pulled the TC-57 with all my might. For some reson it was heavy. Isn't this a gas?
"Great, were do we put this stuff?"
"Let's blow up the jamming devise." I said.
"Good idea, but the should be at least 3 squads were that is and were is the jamming devise?" asked the scout.
"According to the computer it's in the flag room." answered the slicer.
"Were can we get more troops?"
"In the detention center."
"Like we can deal with the Royal Guards there."
"Let's give it a shot, it's either charging in there with a gun or walking in the cell."
"Or dead."
We went through the air vents. It lead us just outside the detention room. Two Vaktovians were guarding the door. I tossed a grenade and they were launched to the opposite end of the room. Four Royal Guards rushed through the door.
"Come and get me you Vakatoin scum!"
I ran outside the tower, the Royal Guards followed. The other two who were still in the air vents climbed out when the Royal Guards and I were out of sight. They surprised the Vakatoins and freed the captured RAT soldiers who took the guard's weapons.
I was having some trouble. My cyclon shot a round, the Royal Guards headed for cover. All my shots missed. Then one Vakatoin punched me on the head. I fell down and stopes the cyclon. I reached for my pistol, but the kicked it out of my hand. Then all four of the Royal Guards fell. A group of 12 RATs ran up to me.
"Let's get that jamming devise!"
Then the alarm went off... |
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| 15 Jul 2011 09:19 PM |
| keep going... i like this. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 10:31 PM |
Oooooh, c'mon part 9!
-The Fool |
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| 15 Jul 2011 10:47 PM |
Part 9
"Get to the flag room!"
"Go, go, go!"
"Guard the gate!"
We ran to the flag room. It was all or nothing. The alarm clearly stated that they knew where we were. This time we didn't have the element of surprise.
"Two Vakatoins up ahead!"
"Four more coming up!"
Bang, Bam, Bang, Bam!
Shotgun shells, machine gun fire, even grenades flew everywhere. Two conscripts fell. And a VAK private and sargent too.
"AAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!"
"Medic, we need a medic!"
"Gernade, get down!"
"Sniper!"
"Man down!"
Finally the last Vakatoin fell. We lost two conscripts, a scout, and a coordinator.
"We only have 9 troops left!"
We got to the flag room.
"Were's that explosive gas?"
"Right here!"
The slicer tossed the containers of gas in the air. It hit the other side of the room. It only took one shot... BOOM!!! The Royal guards went flying in the air.
"Get on the communication unit!"
The radio started as static then burst with life.
"Come in Swampy Moon team, do you read?"
"We read loud and clear!"
"What happened?"
"Nevermind that, get a new division here were pinned down!"
"Right away!"
Then more Royal Guards came in.
BANG, BANG, BANG! BOOM! BANG!
"There are too many!" |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:00 PM |
This is just simply amazing, and continues to make me want more.
-The Fool |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:04 PM |
| Part 10 will be the last part, but not the last story! I'm already planning it the next. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:04 PM |
| so... its the end of this story? |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:06 PM |
| Still need to make part 10. |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:08 PM |
When's part 10 due?
-The Fool |
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| 15 Jul 2011 11:19 PM |
| Sometime tomorrow. I think in the morning. |
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| 16 Jul 2011 08:33 AM |
Part 10
"Take cover!"
We shot at anything that moved at the other side of the room. Grenades flew in the air, nothing survived the endless explosions. We couldn't figure out where they all came from. Then the wall exploded. Dust and debre flew everywhere.
"It's the RAT!"
New troops came out of the helicopters. The sound of SC-11s was replaced with cyclones and dual shotguns. The new troops brought new voices too.
"Advance, advance!" (dashingfirestar1)
"We've got them on the run!"
"Gernade, gernade!" (Hax0rBacara)
I heard the pilot.
"Get in!"
We got in and lifted off. I even learned the pilot's name, gopherivv.
Mission Accomplished.
The End.
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| 16 Jul 2011 08:34 AM |
| After part 9 part 10 looks boring. LOL |
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| 16 Jul 2011 08:52 AM |
| World war II please. This was just amazing. |
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