lordneo
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:33 PM |
Here's the scenario:
A doll is being used for ritual for a teenager to put her mother's soul into the doll. Once the demon spell ends, the doll goes nuts. I don't know what to add from there. .-. |
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:34 PM |
| Watch Chuckie and read some creepypastas. |
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xtreamk12
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:35 PM |
| Doll starts doing that ritual to the daughter? |
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lordneo
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:36 PM |
Oh, and the story is about a possessed doll murdering people and stitching body parts of them into a body similar to her body before she died. But she needs hr memories.
Her daughter... |
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:39 PM |
Describe everything well enough so that the reader will feel they are actually there. Emphasise all negative emotions more than you would positive ones. Don't just go "ololol blood ololol" like everyone else, use suspense instead. Don't give away the story at the start, force people to read and surprise them with plot twists. |
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:40 PM |
Idea since I am interested in creepy things.
Youtube - Creepy Doll (song) Creepypasta - Cupcakes Creepypasta - Squidwards suicide Creepypasta - Rarity's new dress
That should hold you for 10 chapters. |
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:41 PM |
Sensory details mah girl.
I'm not too good at stories though. |
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:46 PM |
Never be "polite". Stay dark and gritty. Give SOME characters an instinct for survival, but NEVER an upper hand. Add hope into your story for the characters and the reader- Then destroy it. Always write more than you need to, then cut out all the bits you don't need. Watch and read other horror or study psychology.
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:48 PM |
| And no happy ending. Even when the story is over and the demons are gone, make clear that the surviving characters can never return to their normal lives ever again. |
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Duskeh
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| 13 Jul 2011 04:49 PM |
Kill the main character. Make him/her/it die a gruesome death. |
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