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| 02 Jul 2011 04:49 PM |
It was a peaceful day in ROBLOXia. The suns rays were shining brightly down onto the town of ROBLOXian Falls, where thousands of players roamed and explored the famous landmark at the heart of the city each day. ROBLOXians passed by and greeted each other. Others sat on the benches surrounding the fountian in the middle of the street. The fountian was one of the many famous things known in ROBLOXian Falls. The fountian itself was almost as gourgeous as the whole city. The wet marble gleamed in the bright sunlight as the citizens of the town paused and took a moment to look at the cool water rushing from the fountianhead. Tall buildings loomed over the players as they passed by the enormous structures. One tower was amazingly tall. Many of the players gazed up in awe at the gigantic glass building. The building was the tallest building in ROBLOXia. Many players explained it as 'The limit of the skies.' The building stood right at the peak of the stratosphere. Some players were brave enough to take the long elevator ride on a transparent glass elevator up to the very top of the building. Several other players were too afraid to go so high up. The building was not just a tower, though. It was a 4 star hotel. Its glass panes shone in the bright sunlight. Many players checked into the hotel each day. One player had on a bright yellow T-shirt and bright blue denim jeans. Her name was Christy. Her long blond hair shone in the sunlight pouring down. She was 19 and was a college student at the University of ROBLOXian Education. She was taking science classes hoping to find a way to eliminate one thing that was a pain to many residents of ROBLOXia-lag. Lag was infecting almost every place imaginable with slowness that sometimes was so bad that it froze players in place for long periods of time. She had a good amount of money because she had been paid several robux for her amazing results in her final exam in highschool. She had passed the test with an A+ with a score of 106%. She decided to take a break in the hotel until the next day. The hotel was so fancy, nobody could even give it a name. She took off her sunglasses and put them in her purse. She pushed the shining glass door open and walked into the hotel. She walked up to the hotel desk. "Hello, madam, how may I help you today?" asked a young man who was wearing a black tuxedo. "I'd like to book into a room." "Okay. Would you like room service?" asked the young man. "Sure." said Christy. "That will be 165 robux."said the man. "No problem." said Christy. The young man chuckled. She pulled out her wallet and gave the man the cash. "Here are the keys to your room. You will be escorted to your room very shortly." The man smiled. 5 minutes later, another man walked to her. "Right this way, please." he said. Little did anybody know a darkness was about to rise.. To be continued |
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| 02 Jul 2011 04:53 PM |
| (165 robux just to rent a room!?! roblox must of gone to hell in the ecomony...) |
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| 02 Jul 2011 04:54 PM |
| (great story so far btw,can i be in?) |
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| 02 Jul 2011 04:55 PM |
(Hey, hey, she said she had a good amount of robux, go on with it.) Good. Continue please? |
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| 02 Jul 2011 04:56 PM |
| Absoloute free bump! (Use onlt for cool threads!) infinite remaning :3 |
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| 02 Jul 2011 04:57 PM |
Only* Sorry. I typed to fast
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| 02 Jul 2011 05:03 PM |
| It cost that much cause its fancy, VERY fancy |
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| 02 Jul 2011 07:25 PM |
Christy followed the man to a large glass elevator. He pressed a button, and the elevator's silver doors slid open. The two players stepped inside. The doors closed. The man pressed the button labled '25.' The ride began. Christie held on to the fancy brass bars of the glass elevator. She looked to her left. The ropes and cables were clearly visible. She shuddered. Christie knew that the chance of an elevator failing was very unlikely, but she changed her mind when a sudden screech of gears erupted from the elevator. "Oh my god!" said Christie. "Don't worry." said the man kindly. Suddenly, the elevator began to bounce violently. "CHANGE OF PLANS!" he yelled. He frantically pressed the emergency break button, but things just got worse. Christie turned around and gasped. "THE ROPE IS SNAPPING!" Christie had to yell even louder than the man to be heard above the terrifying sound of screeching gears. "HOLD ON TIGHT!" said the man. "NO KIDDING~!" the ropes snapped completely. The elevator had only just started to fall, and it was already terribly fast. "AHHHHHHHH!!!!"Both players screamed loudly, clutching the brass bar. The two young players screamed as the elevator plummeted down. A dark figure appeared in the air, watching, laughing. "YES! YES!! AHAHAHAHA!" To be continued... |
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| 02 Jul 2011 07:29 PM |
| (Btw, brickguy you can be in the story. Role play name please?) |
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| 02 Jul 2011 07:38 PM |
| This is now ROBLOX-The Battle TM. Under no circumstances shall anything marked with TM be copied without permission from the original author. Doing so without permission, which I will say no, I will report you. |
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| 02 Jul 2011 08:07 PM |
| GTG, I'm actually only nine, and because we'll be up late with the fireworks and barbecue, I gotta go to |
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| 03 Jul 2011 09:05 AM |
Can i be in story? Its good so far.
I just wanna be someone with power. (Example: THIS CHOCOLATE MILK IS ONLY 2% CHOCOLATE! BANISHED!)
Or maybe not... |
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| 03 Jul 2011 09:48 AM |
| Cookie, Spider, you can be in. Spider, I guess you can be evil.. Heh. |
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| 03 Jul 2011 09:57 AM |
| I was born ready for part 3! |
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| 03 Jul 2011 10:06 AM |
@gianni You don't have to be sorry, it was a typo. If you look closely, I had some mistakes in part 1. Everyone makes mistakes. With kind regards and a hope to have a sucsessful story, HarryPotter4456 |
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| 03 Jul 2011 11:38 AM |
| LOL, I only need a couple more people to say they're ready and I'll make part 3! |
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| 03 Jul 2011 12:35 PM |
O.kay.Then. Part 3 a-comin' up! |
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| 03 Jul 2011 12:45 PM |
Note: This is third person, in this chapter my character will appear and I will switch to first person.
The elevator wooshed down lower and lower, faster and faster. Christie cried, clutching the brass bar for dear life. Suddenly both the man and Christie looked down and gasped. The bottom floor was only ten feet below them! The two screamed as the fragile glass shattered beneath their feet. Christie and the man in the elevator were violently thrown to the ground and knocked unconscious. Above, the cloaked figure laughed evily. "Now to finish off ROBLOXia's only hope! HAHAHAHA!" With a flick of his wrist, a purple-black plasma ball appeared in front of him, gleaming with pure dark energy. "SAY GOODBYE!" he said. He focused all his energy into the ball, and released. Even he had to shield himself from the blinding white light. With a BOOM! It was all over, Christie and the hotel servant's bodies lying in the large crater..
To Be Continued DUN DUN DUNNNNN |
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| 03 Jul 2011 12:49 PM |
| Cool story so far...can i be in it? |
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