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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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06 Jul 2011 10:12 PM
Im making a movie, about 10 minutes long. About an 18-20 year old who finally realizes, that he has to unravel his past to complete the unfinished business he is feeling. His parents are killed when he is young, and is then cared for after a middle aged man finds him in his ruined house. The man dies of natural causes when the kid is 17 and the kid has to take care of himself now. A year later, walking on a desolate road, he spots a small shack, much like his own, getting robbed. He watches as the escapee quickly makes a run for it, hoping no one see him. The kid walks up to the house cautiously. He slips inside to find a women, Bethany, cowering in a corner, screaming, "Please don't hurt me!"
The kid helps her up, and she tells him the whole story. She thought the man sent to rob her house, could've been someone hired by an old friend of hers, as vengeance. She explains that the friend believes that Bethany's late husband, was actually stolen by Bethany, from her friend.

This is the first scene I am hoping to make for my shortfilm. Is it reasonable? Unrealistic? Id appreciate feedback. Thanks.

Director: Me

The Kid: Me

Bethany: N/A

Bethany's Ex friend: N/A

The Kid's Other Friends (Unnamed at the moment): LJRJ, PurelyRandom (Need 2 more)
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lollypop296 is not online. lollypop296
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07 Jul 2011 10:03 AM
bethany
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 10:20 AM
No. You have no experience.
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Aizec is not online. Aizec
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07 Jul 2011 10:32 AM
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 10:36 AM
Director: Me

The Kid: Me

Bethany: N/A

Bethany's Ex friend: N/A

Scott: Aizec

Madlaw: PurelyRandom

Rich: LJRJ

Eric: N/A
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leouch is not online. leouch
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07 Jul 2011 11:51 AM
I'm ether Eric or the enclave. Choose... The enclave could be a cool run in.
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 11:52 AM
@ Leouch...

This isn't fallout. It's set in a post apocolyptic time, but it isnt fallout.
You can still
be
Eric
Though
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 11:53 AM
Director: Me

The Kid: Me

Bethany: N/A

Bethany's Ex friend: N/A

Scott: Aizec

Madlaw: PurelyRandom

Rich: LJRJ

Eric: Leouch
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leouch is not online. leouch
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07 Jul 2011 12:16 PM
Alright, sorry. Thanks for giving me Eric.
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Bobbysayhi is not online. Bobbysayhi
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07 Jul 2011 12:45 PM
Well. It doesn't matter as much on what the script is. You can make it good if you have the skills. If you don't it will be bad.
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leouch is not online. leouch
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07 Jul 2011 12:56 PM
That's good Bobby, good constructive critism, usually you jump to the chase and jump all over the idea. :D
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 01:12 PM
Care to help me bobby? Eh eh?
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 05:03 PM
Director: Me

The Kid: Me

Bethany: N/A

Bethany's Ex friend: N/A

Scott: Aizec

Madlaw: PurelyRandom

Rich: LJRJ

Eric: Leouch

Bob (Elderly Man): Rossb654
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bobpi is not online. bobpi
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07 Jul 2011 05:20 PM
ex-freind, plz
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googtube19 is not online. googtube19
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07 Jul 2011 05:21 PM
The ex friend is a girl
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Bobbysayhi is not online. Bobbysayhi
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07 Jul 2011 06:59 PM
sure I'll help
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