Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:22 PM |
I'm scrapping Chapter 4. It was terrible.
Part 1:
It all starts off as a normal morning.
"Ahhh! Gooooood mornin'!" said Blitz, yawning lazily. He got up, cleaned himself, and he was out. As he was out, he noticed an unusually sad Worthy slumping down the sidewalk. "Worthy!" Blitz called. "What's wrong?" "Ohhh...nothing you'd care about..." Worthy said with sadness. "You know, I hate to see people sad." Blitz said. "Fine...sigh...Cinnamon...left me..." Worthy said.
This is just a starting point, and just testing if the story mode looks better. I think it's much better. :) |
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Blitz967
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Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:35 PM |
C'mon, I'm not letting this die. Where's Icelina3 when you need her? |
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DJP0N3
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:35 PM |
best.
~FOUR STRENGTH FOUR STAMINA? LEVEL EIGHTTEEN?!?!? AGGH UAGH~ |
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flashzero
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:36 PM |
Blitz, I am disappoint. We need Kaly, now. |
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Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:37 PM |
@flash
You mean add Kalyrian to the story? Okay. :L |
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Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 06:59 PM |
Part 2:
"What?! But how?" Blitz inquired. "I dunno...she was gone this morning, and left a note..." said Worthy. "Can I see it?" "Sure..." Blitz reads the note. "Whoa, it sounds like she's very angry. I dare not read this out loud. How did you get her so mad? And why weren't you ripped to shreds in your sleep?" "I dunno. But she's gone, and I don't think she's coming back." Worthy walked back to his house, head hanging. "Hmm...looks like we got an Pokemon going AWOL." Blitz said, putting on an army helmet. "Time to get serious."
Blitz rushes to his house and gets the phone. He calls Icelina. "Huh...ummm...who is this?" Icelina whispers in a low, tired voice." "This is Sgt. Blitz talking. We have a Pokemon gone AWOL, and I need your and Sapphire's help." "Okay....let me clean up first..." "Be quick. Sgt. Blitz out."
Blitz dials Sapphire's number. "Yo!" says Sapphire. "This is Sgt. Blitz speaking. We have an Pokemon gone AWOL." "Oh no! Who's?" "Worthy's. He showed me a note Cinnamon left, and it's a very angry note." "Is that even possible?" "I don't even know. But I've called Icelina over, so we can plan this out." "Okay, I'll be there." "I love your enthusiasm, soldier! Sgt. Blitz out." |
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| 15 Jun 2011 07:01 PM |
| compared to the other chapters this one is like terrible :u |
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Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 07:03 PM |
@RT
This one is based off a current dilemma in OT But I'm gonna try to be more original in the next chapter |
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Blitz967
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| 15 Jun 2011 08:29 PM |
Part 3:
Minutes later, Icelina and Sapphire arrive at Blitz's house. Icelina knocks on the door. Blitz comes out, fully dressed in an army suit.
"Icelina, Sapphire, I'm glad you could make it. Let me explain the situation to you. Come with me."
The three go downstairs, into Blitz's lab.
"Okay, so the mission here is to search and retrieve Worthy's Cinnamon. I call it: Operation Search and Retrieve. Now I know it's not the best name there is, but there's no time to a fancy-shmancy name! I've already asked Worthy where Cinnamon might've headed. Most likely towards the desert-" Blitz was interrupted by Sapphire.
"What would a Pokemon like her be looking for in the desert?" Sapphire inquired. "DON'T QUESTION THE FACTS, SON!" Blitz roared. "SIR, YES, SIR!" Sapphire said respectfully.
"Now, where was I...oh yeah. So Cinnamon might be headed towards the desert. Why, we don't know. Maybe she wants somewhere far from Worthy. DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?!!"
"SIR, YES, SIR!" Sapphire obeyed. "Yeah, I understand. This all sounds stupid, in my opin-" "DO YOU WANT TO RUN THE LENGTH OF THIS WHOLE NEIGHBORHOON 5 TIMES, LADY?!!" Blitz yelled. "SIR, NO, SIR!" Icelina struggled to say. "THEN TO TALK, JUST ACTIONS! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?!!" Blitz commanded. "SIR, YES, SIR!" Icelina obeyed. "Good! Now moooove out, soldiers!" Blitz said, heading for the door. As Icelina and Sapphire were walking to the door, Icelina whispered to Sapphirefear, "Sheesh, what a maniac!" |
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| 15 Jun 2011 08:29 PM |
| BEWM! DYNAMITE RAINS FROM THE SKY KILLING EVERYONE! |
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Blitz967
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Icelina3
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Riovedrag
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:50 PM |
@Icelina
Yay! :D BTW, I'm Blitz967. My main got bannned for 3 days. |
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Icelina3
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:51 PM |
"BTW, I'm Blitz967. My main got bannned for 3 days."
Again?
What'd you do? |
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Riovedrag
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:53 PM |
@Icelina
Banned for "Inappropriate Topics". It's like the mods hate me or something. :/ |
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Icelina3
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:54 PM |
"It's like the mods hate me or something."
Why would mods hate you. :( |
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Riovedrag
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:56 PM |
@Icelina
I dunno. But they ban me for the most ridiculous reasons. I bet other OTers have the same problem. |
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Icelina3
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:57 PM |
"But they ban me for the most ridiculous reasons."
That's not fair. :l
"I bet other OTers have the same problem."
That's not fair either! :( |
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Icelina3
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| 17 Jun 2011 09:59 PM |
| I THINK THE MODS HAVE DIRTIER MINDS THAN US IF THEY THINK EVERYTHING WE POST IS "DIRTY"! |
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Riovedrag
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