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Re: Shattered Love - A Warriors Fanfiction

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Imafighter is not online. Imafighter
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08 May 2011 09:58 PM
(Note: I do not own the Warriors series. I am just writing in their universe.
Double Note: All credit goes to Kawakage, at the fanfic web. Enjoy!)

Chapter 1: Kit to Apprentice

"Graypaw!" called a small kit. She poked her head out of the nursery and looked for her friend. Bluestar had just ended a Clan meeting and her mother had refused to let her come out.

"But mom, I'm six moons old! I should be able to go to Clan meetings now!" she argued to her mother when the meeting was first called.

"I know, and your apprentice ceremony will be soon, but some cat has to stay behind to watch the kits, and I'm not letting you go out there on your own." her mother, Featherfur replied softly. She bent down and licked her kit's head.

"I can't wait to be an apprentice!" she yowled at her mother. Featherfur sighed and turned to the mewling kits. Her daughter rolled her fire-red eyes before looking out the nursery.

"Graypaw!" she called again, wanting to see her gray-furred friend.

"Yes Mosskit?" he answered, walking over to her with a stranger at his side. The kit gasped and let her claws slid out, as her fur fluffed up.

"There's a rogue behind you!" she yowled rushing out of the nursery. Graypaw just crackled a laugh.

"He's not a rogue, or a loner either." he replied. The kit stopped growling and her fur returned to normal.

"Then who is he?" she asked, looking at the ginger stranger.

"This is Firepaw. He's going to be training to be an apprentice like me." he responded. Mosskit growled at the word apprentice. She thought it was unfair that Graypaw became an apprentice before her. They were the same age and were the best of friends in the nursery.

"Hi." Firepaw purred as Mosskit looked him over.

"He smells like a kittypet." she stated, standing next to Graypaw.

"I used to be one, but now I'm part of ThunderClan." the ginger tom meowed, standing firm.

"ThunderClan doesn't need more apprentices!" Mosskit snarled. Firepaw winced, thinking that he said something wrong.

"Don't worry; you'll be one before you know it." Graypaw reassured. Mosskit just flattened her ears. Taking a deep breath she looked at them.

"So what are you doing?" she asked.

"Taking a tour of the camp." Firepaw answered.

"Can I come?"

"Ask you're mother first." Graypaw reasoned.

"Fine. Mom, can I go with Graypaw and show the new cat around camp?" she yowled. Featherfur walked out of the nursery, her light green eyes worried, and her fur twitching.

"I guess, but don't leave camp and be back before sundown." she told her daughter. She was very protective of Mosskit since her son, Mosskit's brother, Wolfkit, died from a raid by rogues.

"Thank you mom." Mosskit meowed, touching her nose to her mother's white and black flank.

"Come on then." Graypaw announced, walking toward the Warriors den. Featherfur watched her daughter as she went with the two young apprentices.

She has to grow up sometime, and I guess that time is now. She thought to herself. Frostfur and Speckletail walked up to her, distracting her from her thoughts. She nodded to them. Speckletail immediately went into the nursery to check on her kits, leaving her with Frostfur.

"Did you hear what happened?" Frostfur asked standing next to her, sadness shining in her eyes.

"No, Mosskit was arguing with me. I couldn't even hear myself think." she replied, looking at Frostfur.

"Redtail was killed!" That sent a shudder through Featherfur's splashed fur. "And Ravenpaw was seriously injured."

"The poor thing. I remember looking after him when he was nothing more than a newborn kit." The queens continued to talk, but Featherfur kept her gaze on the sleek, white figure in the distance. Her precious kit. She would soon have to deal with battles, and the horrors that come with it. Featherfur couldn't bear to imagine it.


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"Here's the Warrior's den!" Mosskit shouted, jumping up and down. She was so excited just to be out of the stuffy nursery and away from all the whining kits.

"The senior warriors get to sleep in the middle where it's warmer." Graypaw added.

"But every cat has their own little nest, so when you choose where to sleep, you're stuck there. Now come on, I want to go see Spottedleaf!" Mosskit shouted with happiness. The two tomcats shared a look. "What?"

"We shouldn't go in there right now." Graypaw meowed, looking at her.

"Why? Spottedleaf loves it when I see her." she replied, feeling confused.

"She's busy with patients right now." Firepaw added, making her nervous.

"What happened?" she demanded. Graypaw took her away from the Warriors den and told her to lie down in the shade of the camp wall. Firepaw was a little confused, but stood next to Graypaw.

"There was a battle. R-Redtail was killed by a RiverClan warrior, and Ravenpaw was injured." Graypaw whispered. Mosskit gasped and looked at him with disbelief.

"T-then who's the new deputy?"

"Bluestar hasn't chosen one yet. But personally, I hope she picks Leopardstripe."

"He won't want that. Father doesn't want to be the deputy anyway." Mosskit replied, the shock ebbing away.

"You okay?" Graypaw asked her. She nodded. "Then let's go teach Firepaw how you never disturb the elders." After giving her a quick lick on the ear, they toured the rest of the camp.

When they reached the elders, they were welcomed with warm eyes and purrs.

"Hello youngsters." one greeted them.

"Hi Smallear, we're giving the newest apprentice a tour." Mosskit announced nodding politely. Graypaw repeated the action. The rest of the elders looked up and focused their attention on Firepaw, but only for a moment.

"So this is our new apprentice Firepaw." meowed a different cat.

"Yes." Firepaw responded, nodding like Mosskit and Graypaw.

"Welcome to ThunderClan." Several cats purred.

"Are you hungry?" Dappletail asked, giving Mosskit a soft lick between the ears.

"We could spare a mouse or two." Halftail meowed pointing to a small pile of prey.

"Thank you." The three young cats chimed at once.

"Firepaw, you should get first bite, since I doubt you've had anything as wonderful as mouse before." Mosskit joked, smiling to herself.

"Thanks." he responded sinking his jaws into a plump mouse. He closed his eyes as the warmth and flavors swept over him. Graypaw and Mosskit pushed him aside playfully.

"Let us have some!" Graypaw protested.

"Don't be rude to your new friends! Or else we'll gang up and take you down while you sleep!" Mosskit purred. After they each had some to eat, Bluestar called a Clan meeting. Mosskit followed them, hoping not to be noticed by her mother.

"Aren't you going to get in trouble?" Graypaw asked as they sat down.

"No. It's not sundown, and I'm still in camp." she retorted, searching the clearing while hiding behind her friends.

"Do you know what this meeting's about?" Firepaw inquired, trying to stop them from fighting.

"Bluestar's going to tell us who the new deputy will be." A new voice sounded. Only Firepaw jumped. Mosskit gave a small laugh as he licked his chest fur to hide his embarrassment.

"Leopardstripe." Graypaw motioned to the giant tabby as he sat next to Mosskit. His white legs looked like fresh fallen snow as the sun shined on them. His face looked alienated, as if belonging to two different cats. One side was white, while the other was striped brown and black. A single stripe started from the corner of his left eye and went down his back to his striped tail. The one thing Firepaw didn't understand, was his name. Along his light brown sides were darker colored spots, like a leopard. So where did the stripe part come in? His question was answered when Leopardstripe moved. The spots morphed into stripes as his fur quivered.

"You must've heard from Bluestar then." he meowed to Mosskit.

"That Redtail died? No Graypaw told me." she replied, tilting her head.

"Not that, the cere-, oh you don't know, then I'll keep it a secret."

"What are you talking about father?" she persisted, staring at him.

"Nothing. I'm going to go see where you're mother is." he smiled, leaving them.

"Guess you're not in trouble." Graypaw whispered once he was out of earshot. Mosskit opened her mouth, but was cut off as Bluestar bounded up to the top of Highrock. She let out a yowl that silenced her chattering Clan.

"Tonight we have many things to cover, both good and bad. To start with the bad, we all mourn our fallen deputy, Redtail. But life must go on. I say these words so that his spirit will approve of my choice." she paused, closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Most of the warriors were looking at Tigerclaw, while some were staring at Leopardstripe from the corners of their eyes. But the giant tabby, along with Featherfur and the elders were looking at Lionheart. Even Whitestorm was staring at him. Bluestar opened her eyes. They were expressionless, as she looked over her Clan.

"Lionheart will be the new deputy of ThunderClan."

Lionheart stepped forward and nodded, "I will serve my Clan well."

"I know you will. Next to some happier news. One of our kits has been eagerly waiting to become an apprentice. Tonight, she finally will. Mosskit, come here." Mosskit was frozen to the ground as she heard her name. And only after a nudge from Graypaw and Firepaw did she finally move her paws. With one look at her mother and father, she saw pride in their eyes, making her the happiest cat in the world.

"From this day on, until she earns her warrior name, this apprentice shall be known as Mosspaw." Bluestar's gaze shifted from the newly apprenticed cat to a small brown dusky she-cat. "Mousefur, it is time you had your first apprentice, you will mentor young Mosspaw. You are a great fighter as well as a talented hunter. And you know when it is time to strike and when you need to listen. I know you'll be a great mentor for her and will teach her everything you know." Mousefur walked up to the young cat and gently touched noses with her. She looked as proud and excited as her new apprentice.

"Mosspaw! Mosspaw!" The Clan yowled with enthusiasm. Mousefur guided her to the edge of the group and continued to watch Bluestar.

"One of our apprentices has recently been left without a mentor. Dustpaw, your new mentor will be Darkstripe. I expect him to teach you everything he learned from Tigerclaw. Now I will take vigil for Redtail, you are dismissed." She finished and jumped to the bottom of Highrock. Graypaw and Firepaw ran over to Mosspaw.

"I told you that you would become an apprentice soon." Graypaw said, licking her on the forehead.

"I-I'm just so, so excited. I just can't believe I'm now going to be training with you guys." she stuttered, her eyes wide with eagerness.

"We're so proud of you Mosspaw." Featherfur and Leopardstripe purred, coming up to their daughter. Featherfur licked her kit on the ears as Leopardstripe placed his tail around her shoulders.

"We'll see you in the apprentice den." Graypaw announced, leaving them. Firepaw stayed, in till Graypaw wrapped his tail around his friend's throat and led him away.

"They need to be alone for right now." he meowed to the ginger tom as they headed to their den.

Just as they were settling in, Mosspaw joined them. She yawned as she curled up against Firepaw and Graypaw, her two friends. Giving them each a lick on the ear, she purred, and rested her head on her paws. Falling into a deep sleep, she felt as if nothing could go wrong.



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Imafighter is not online. Imafighter
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08 May 2011 10:03 PM
Don't give up on me now, peoples!
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08 May 2011 10:13 PM
Bring
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09 May 2011 05:37 AM
Bump, again. COME ON, I WONT CONTINUE WITHOUT REVIEWS!
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09 May 2011 07:12 AM
TL;DR
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09 May 2011 07:14 AM
TL;DR
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Imafighter is not online. Imafighter
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09 May 2011 08:59 PM
...what?
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What in the world does TL;DR mean?
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Imafighter is not online. Imafighter
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09 May 2011 09:08 PM
Nevermind. But anyways, it ISN'T too long. You should see other stories.
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12 May 2011 01:30 PM
It's still too long.
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Imafighter is not online. Imafighter
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15 May 2011 11:21 AM
Chracter Referance:

An Author's Note From Kawakage (The Author)

I've had a few questions about the first chapter. For starters, with Leopardstripe he doesn't actually morph. His fur just moves and it looks like his spots turn to stripes. My own living cat, who I based Leopardstripe after, his fur does as well when he stretches or moves. And the history behind Mosspaw's heritage will be revealed later on, it plays a big part in the story. And thanks to everyone who likes the first chapter. Hope you like the rest of it!

A little um… reference, includes cats that are coming… but are just the ones that I came up with…

Mosspaw: Snow white she-cat, has ebony paws, legs, dash on chest and tip of tail. Eyes are fire-red.

Featherfur: Black and white she-cat with light green eyes.

Leopardstripe: Amber eyed tom. Has white legs and underbelly, light brown flank with dark brown patches and black spots that turn into stripes when fur moves. Half of face is white while the other is striped black and tawny. Has a stripe from left eye that heads down his spine. Tail is also striped as well as the back of his head.

Wolfkit: Dark brown tom with a black lightning stripe down back to the tip of his tail. Has yellow eyes.

Halo: Black she cat with a white line around neck, circles around her legs right above her paws. Has dark green eyes.

Leo: Ginger tom with white patch on right ear and eye. Has light brown eyes.

A may add another one of these later in the story. Happy readings!

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(Note to all: These "Questions" were in PMs, ok?)
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Boooring.
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Don't listen to these two,imafighter...You're storie's nice...^-^...

~Lady~ [Join VAK, NFC, F.E.A.R. It's epic and cool.]
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17 May 2011 07:33 AM
it was vary nice :D
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Ooc; I must admit, it was a tad boring. But this was mostly because you put too much into the first post, so it was a bit overbearing to read.
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TERRIBLE LOL
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tl;dr
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TL;DR is the only good description of this "story".
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09 Jun 2011 12:22 PM
Here's Chapter two of Shattered Love. Thanks to everyone that reviewed for Chapter 1!

Chapter 2: First Day

"Wake up!" yowled a voice. Jumping, Mosspaw opened her eyes. Looking around she saw that Dustpaw and Sandpaw weren't in their nests. Graypaw, who was groggy with sleep, lifted his head and yawned. Firepaw was licking down his ruffled fur. There was no sign of anyone else that could have made the call.

"Who-" Mosspaw started.

"Good apprentices should be out and waiting for their mentors!" the voice yowled again. Scrambling to their feet, all three cats ran out of the den. Awaiting them outside was Tigerclaw, Lionheart and Mousefur.

"Leave them alone Tigerclaw, they had a very long night. And Firepaw and Mosspaw are going to experience their first day of being an apprentice." Lionheart replied. Mousefur looked like she was both frightened and angry at Tigerclaw, who growled at Lionheart.

"Lionheart, I'm going to go take Mosspaw on a patrol of the border." Mousefur whispered.

"Can't we go on a patrol with Firepaw and Graypaw?" Mosspaw asked quietly.

"I don't think so." Tigerclaw snarled making her shrink closer to Graypaw.

"Then let's get going Mosspaw." Mousefur hurried, pushing her apprentice away. Looking back at her friends, Mosspaw left camp for the first time.


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"I'm so thankful he was never my mentor." Mousefur sighed, once they reached the top of the sandy ravine.

"Who was your mentor?" Mosspaw asked as she sat down.

"Rosetail was. I'll teach you everything she taught me."

"So where are we going first?"

"To the RiverClan border. I'm going to teach you the scents of the other Clans, then scents about all the prey and predators in the forest."

"Are we going to see any RiverClan warriors?"

"I don't think so. We're too late for the morning patrol, but we might see a hunting party." Mousefur meowed, scenting the wind.

"Which way is RiverClan territory?" Mosspaw asked, her paws twitching with anticipation.

"Towards Fourtrees. We have a lot of ground to cover though. You up to it?"

"Of course! I've been waiting to do this forever!" Mousefur looked at Mosspaw warmly as she jumped up and down.

"Then let's go." Feeling the sun on her pelt, and energy flowing through her, Mosspaw followed Mousefur through the undergrowth.


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"I smell mouse!" Mosspaw announced. They had just passed the Owl tree and were now catching their breath.

"Good, where is it?" Mousefur asked, sitting down. Mosspaw closed her eyes and let the scents of the forest overwhelm her.

"It's hiding in that bush." she replied pointing towards a juniper bush.

"Excellent, now see if you can catch it. Keep you body low to the ground and step lightly. And be aware of your surroundings. You wouldn't want to lose a piece of prey by getting your tail caught on a bush." Mousefur instructed, drawing her own tail over her paws. Mosspaw nodded and headed for the bush. Doing as her mentor said, she dropped low to the ground. Carefully placing her paws, she took one step at a time. Turning around the corner she spotted the mouse. Before it could make a sound, she pounced on it and killed it with a swift bite to the neck.

"I did it!" Mosspaw shouted, showing her mentor.

"Well done."

"Should we take it back to camp, or eat it now?"

"You didn't have anything before you left, and we still have a ways to go… So I think I'll just turn a blind eye to this."

"Oh thank you Mousefur. Do you want to share?"

"No, I'm good." she meowed. She climbed up the trunk of a tree and stood at the end of the branch. While her apprentice ate, she scanned the horizon for any predators.

"Mousefur? Do you know why Tigerclaw's in a bad mood?" Mosspaw asked, wiping her tongue over her mouth. Her mentor slid down the tree and looked at her apprentice.

"He's just upset about what happened with RiverClan yesterday. And also not becoming deputy. But he'll get better once some days pass." she replied. Mosspaw nodded as Mousefur started to pace around.

"I hope so, he scares me."

"Don't worry about him. Now let's head towards the border." Mousefur meowed. Mosspaw nodded as they headed towards the sound of rushing water.


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Walking closely along the shore, Mosspaw looked into the crystal blue river. The sunlight bounced off creating little rainbows. Stalling for a moment, she bent over the rushing water. She saw a glimmer of silver racing along with the current.

"What's that?" she asked.

"A fish. RiverClan eat them, but they don't taste nearly as good as a rabbit, mouse, or bird. In fact they taste almost like crowfood. Now get away from the edge before you fall in. I'm not good at swimming and I don't think a RiverClan patrol would like fishing you out of the river."

"Yes Mousefur." she squeaked, jumping away from the edge. Mousefur stopped a few tail lengths away from the rivers edge. Mosspaw followed, sat down and rested her tail over her paws. Her mentor placed her paws under her and warmed herself in the sun.

"We are right next to the border. I want you to take in every scent you can. Then I want you to weed out all the scents you already know." Mousefur instructed. Her apprentice nodded as she let the scents overtake her.

"I smell this muddy, wet, and rainy smell. And there's a tang of what I think is fish."

"Good, that's RiverClan scent. Remember that for the rest of your life. Anything else?"

"Wait, there's this new scent. It's a musky scent, mixed with prey scent. And blood!"

"What?" Mousefur asked. She walked over to Mosspaw and sniffed the air.

"Do you smell it?" Mosspaw whispered. Mousefur's eyes grew wide as she realized what it was.

"It's fox! We have to get out of here!" Mousefur yowled. She placed her teeth in Mosspaw's scruff and dragged her to her feet. Running with fear, they headed towards camp. But the farther they went from the border, the stronger the fox scent got. Mousefur struggled to pinpoint the creature, while protecting her precious apprentice. Dodging shrubs, trees, and unsuspecting prey, Mousefur got nervous.

Where is that piece of crowfood? She thought. Her question was answered as the fox ambushed them. Mosspaw looked at the creature with huge, terrified eyes. She was turned into a statue of stone, frozen to the ground.

"Climb up the trees! Get out of here! Go get help!" Mousefur yowled. Mosspaw didn't even twitch. The fox went closer to her. Mousefur took up a fighting position in front of her apprentice. Snarling she clawed at its face. Beads of blood ran down the fox's muzzle. It didn't even whimper. Growling, the fox bit into Mousefur's back and tossed her aside. Trying to get to her feet, she watched in horror as the fox went after Mosspaw.

"No!" she shouted. The fox had his jaws around the young cat. Its teeth dug into her fur making her yowl out in pain. The fox threw her into the air. She landed with a thud, and was sent sprawling across the forest floor. Mousefur tried to get to her paws, but collapsed each time. In an effort to save her apprentice, she opened her mouth, and screamed with all her might.

The fox looked at Mousefur for a moment, its eyes dark with blood lust. Before the fox could reach her, Mosspaw stood to her feet and bit at the fox's legs. The fox snarled as it lunged for her. It grabbed her by the scruff and tried to suffocate her. Mosspaw whined as blood came out of her neck.

"Let her go you piece of dung!" Mousefur yowled at the creature. She leapt at the creature's neck and bit in maliciously. The fox shook its head and Mousefur lost her grip. Oh no, are we going to fight to the death? She thought as her legs failed her again. As if StarClan was watching, a miracle happened. A battle cry was sounded.

Lionheart, Tigerclaw, Firepaw, and Graypaw bounded through the underbrush. Fiercely they jumped on the fox. They scratched and bit like LionClan in an attempt to save the young apprentice. The fox still held onto Mosspaw. Her eyes rolled back into her head as her paws twitched. Graypaw and Firepaw glared at it through enraged eyes as they watched as their friend was being treated like a toy.

What can we do to make it release Mosspaw? Firepaw growled to himself. Tear her out of its mouth themselves? Kill the fox? Wait! A though hit him. Firepaw climbed atop the fox's head and clawed at its eyes with wrathful swipes. Whimpering, the fox dropped Mosspaw, turned around and fled the cats. Tigerclaw followed it, leaving the rest of the group.

"Mousefur, are you okay?" Lionheart asked, rushing to the she-cat's side.

"Just some cuts and scratches. What about Mosspaw?" she replied, slowly getting to her feet. This time she didn't fall.

"Firepaw and Graypaw are checking on her." he meowed helping the injured cat.

"Oh Lionheart, I'm a terrible mentor. My first apprentice and I almost get her killed and on the first day!" she yowled, shaking her head.

"You're a wonderful mentor. Now just tell me what happened."

"I was teaching her RiverClan scent. While at the border she smelled the fox. So we bolted out of there and tried to get home. But the fox scent started to get stronger no matter which way we went. Then it ambushed us. Mosspaw was frozen with fear and didn't respond to anything I told to her. It went after and attacked me. I tried to give her some time to get away by distracting it, but she was too afraid. The fox went after her after taking care of me."

"See? It wasn't you're fault at all. And I'm sure she'll be just fine." he licked the nervous she-cat's ear, trying to calm her down.

"Mosspaw, Mosspaw, are you okay?" Graypaw asked frantically. She was shivering as she lay on the ground. Firepaw helped Graypaw get her on her feet. Her eyes opened. And she looked around wildly. She shook her head and moved close to the two toms.

"That was the scariest thing ever! I hope I never meet another fox as long as I live!" she shouted, her eyes wide and her body still trembling.

"Don't worry; we'll protect you from anymore foxes!" Graypaw promised her, cleaning his wounded friend's bloodied fur.

"Firepaw, I want to thank you." she meowed looking at the ground.

"For what?" he asked.

"When you clawed at the fox's face, that's what made it let go of me. You saved my life." she whispered, touching her wounded nose to his.

"Hey what about me? I helped too!" Graypaw yowled. Mosspaw gave him a lick on the cheek.

"I know, but you weren't the one that ultimately saved my life." she retorted, earning a small nip on ear. She squeaked in pain, receiving a look from her mentor and Lionheart.

"Is something wrong?" Mousefur asked, concern thickening her voice as she stumbled over to her apprentice.

"Everything hurts, and all I can smell is blood. Can we go back to camp?" Mosspaw asked, watching a droplet of blood from her ear, fall to the ground.

"Yes, and we can get both of your wounds treated. Graypaw, Firepaw, help Mosspaw get back in whatever way you can." Lionheart instructed. As soon as she tried to stand on her feet without help, Mosspaw fell back to the ground. Graypaw and Firepaw both pressed against her shoulders and helped her back on her feet.

Slowly, after much stumbling and tripping, they made their way back to camp. Tigerclaw was waiting for them with Bluestar at his side. She sent them to Spottedleaf, while Lionheart stayed behind to explain what happened.

"So how bad is it?" Spottedleaf asked coming out of her den. She was expecting them, but from what Tigerclaw said, she thought they would be maimed for life.

"Treat Mosspaw first." Mousefur meowed. Firepaw and Graypaw set Mosspaw down gently and backed away from her.

"Certainly. Now let's see what we have here." Spottedleaf replied, checking her over. She parted the wounded cat's fur with her paw and sniffed at her cuts. But when she placed her paw gently on Mosspaw's back, she whined.

"That hurts!" she protested.

"Well I don't thing anything's broken. But you're bruised all over, and have a few wounds that look like they could cause trouble. And you won't be able to go out of camp for a few days."

"But I'll still be able to be an apprentice, right?" Mosspaw asked, desperation shining in her eyes.

"Yes, but for a few days, you'll need to take it easy. And you're going to stay with me so I can check your wounds daily. Now hold still." Spottedleaf ordered. She rubbed a poultice of goldenrod into the bite marks on Mosspaw's neck. She winced and dug her claws into the ground as the poultice stung her wounds. Afterwards Spottedleaf wrapped cobwebs around the apprentices neck, making sure they wouldn't choke her, but also that they would stay on and stop the bleeding.

"Graypaw, go get something from the fresh-kill pile. Firepaw, I need you to go get some more moss. There's a spot right outside camp, make sure there are no splinters in it."

"Yes Spottedleaf." The two cats chimed, leaving the den.

"Now, Mousefur, all you need is some horsetail and cobwebs. Then I want you to get some rest. Everyday I want to check your wounds to make sure there's no infection. And you'll want to take it easy." The dappled tortoiseshell instructed. Mousefur nodded as she waited to be treated. When she was done, Graypaw and Firepaw returned carrying their tasks.

"Spottedleaf, I'm not really hungry right now." Mosspaw meowed as a rabbit was set at her feet.

"Eat some anyway. You need the strength. Then I'll let Ravenpaw have the rest of it when he wakes up. Firepaw, just place that moss over there, by those purple berries. After that you and Graypaw can leave." The two toms stalled for a moment before leaving their friend behind.

"I'll come and visit you later." Mousefur promised Mosspaw, giving her a quick lick on the ear before heading to the warrior den.

"Okay Mosspaw, I've dressed all you're wounds. Now as soon as I make you a nest you can rest." she purred, messing with the pile of moss Firepaw brought. Mosspaw just nodded and dug into fresh-kill brought for her. When she finished, she looked around the den. In the far back she saw a heap of black fur gently rising and falling. That must be Ravenpaw. I haven't seen him since we were both kits in the nursery. That was so long ago, though. He was made an apprentice two moons before me, and Graypaw was made one a few sunrises after that. It wasn't fair. I should've been made an apprentice with him. Mosspaw thought to herself. Just then Ravenpaw lifted his head and looked at her with bright green eyes.

"Spottedleaf, my shoulder's starting to bleed again." he meowed, twitching his whiskers.

"Alright. I'll be right there. Mosspaw, here is your nest and some poppy seeds to help you sleep. I added a little orange blossom, for taste. I know how much you love it."

"Thank you Spottedleaf." Mosspaw purred, licking up the bundle in front of her. With a small yawn, she climbed into the nest prepared for her. Shifting her weight so she wouldn't hurt any part of her, she instantly fell asleep.

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TL;DR
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"fire-red eyes"

I don't think this is possible in a cat.
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Who says that fire-red eyes isn't possible in a cat. Cats can't talk, either. What I am doing is definded as "imagination." Ever heard of it? lol
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