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| 14 Aug 2010 08:21 AM |
(Not real)
Flare100 wakes up screaming
Flare100=Momeh momeh I had a bad dream about the unicorns!!
Acslayer=Get up boy and go make a sammich
Flare100 makes Aceslayer a sammich
Aceslayer=yummie samwich!!
Kaelon01 walks into the dorm
Kaelan01=Come on guys we got to raid john cobra today
Aceslayer,Flare,and kaelan01 walk outside
Donkeyo4=Guys today we raid john cobras this raid will decide who wins the war so work hard.
kaelan01=Im ready!!
The R.A.T'S leave in the truck and off to the john cobras base
In the truck
Low rank= I have to go to the pottie!!
Aceslayer=just hold it until we get there
Low rank =take me to the pottie noob I will exile you
Aceslayer throws the low rank out of the truck
Kaelan01=By the way wheres awesomer?
Awesomer28= I'm the writer of the book I didnt feel like puting myself in it
Kaelan01=oh ok
the truck finaly makes it to the john cobra's base
Kaelan01=lets do this!!
Videodude joins them
Video=hi
Aceslayer=hi
Flare=hi
Kaelon01=hi
The R.A.T's then head for the john cobras base
(Will the R.A.T's survive in the final raid, will the low rank ever go pottie,will flare have another nightmare about the unicorns?)
find out in part 2!! coming tomorow |
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kalma733
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:22 AM |
| will the low rank ever go pottie. THAT IS FUNNY. |
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:24 AM |
| Lol yah part is gonna be hilarious tho |
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PLOOBER33
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:44 AM |
| you can give the low ranks a name,,, |
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:48 AM |
| Ok Mario ill put you in part 2 |
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kalma733
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| 14 Aug 2010 09:04 AM |
AHHHHHHHHH THE POST IS DIEING! *bump* ahhhhhhhhhh thats better. |
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YeeHawk
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kalma733
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| 14 Aug 2010 10:41 AM |
| nah theres to many low ranks as it is. |
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sigh3192
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:26 PM |
good but I see 2 problems
1: Too random (its ok to be random its just too random)
2: Its uh Nieve |
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Catnin
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:30 PM |
| Very funny. I lol'ed on several occasions. Not even the epic music I was listening to (my theme song) could stop me from cracking a smile. |
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:31 PM |
| Catnin I'll put you in part 2 and part 2 will be out tomorow. |
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| 14 Aug 2010 08:31 PM |
| Catnin I'll put you in part 2 and part 2 will be out tomorow. |
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