snowhorse
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| 28 Apr 2010 11:59 AM |
Me and my sister, We sit at the shore, Playing with our dolls, And collecting dead prawns, Then all of a sudden, Out of the blue, A massive wave, Came on crashing through.
Me and my sister, We run to the house, Collect up our items, And run for the clouds, Our parents were out, Out at the sea, We knew they were dead, From this tsunami.
Me and my sister, We run for our lives, Up to the mountain, While we hear people cry, We know they are sad, And my little sister says, "Why are they crying, And just not running like us",
Me and my sister, We sit on the mountains, As we look down, At the houses drowning, We see people floating, In and out of the sea, But its not our fault, It was that tsunami.
---------------------------- =D I made this up in 3 minutes. I love doing poems! Please comment :3 |
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CapRex213
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snowhorse
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CapRex213
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Noddles
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x3pro
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giroom
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:02 PM |
| Why does the 2nd and 4th stanza have rhyme? |
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CapRex213
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:03 PM |
| D. E. R. PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP |
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snowhorse
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:03 PM |
| I wish people like them would stop being rude. I reported them for not sticking to the rules of foruming... |
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:05 PM |
| Sorry,there just a bunch of re-tards,i thought it was okay,but kind of depressing ;~; |
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CapRex213
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:05 PM |
| DDDERRRPPPPP (btw this is allowed) |
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CapRex213
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:06 PM |
| Sorry for the derps, by brother was on my account. He tries to get me banned. |
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:06 PM |
Saying `DERP` is spam, and bannable for trolling and spamming. Enjoy your bans guys ;)
Anyways, great job! |
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CapRex213
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:07 PM |
| I hope i dont get banned for what my bro did. Anyway, awsome poem. |
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:07 PM |
"Sorry for the derps, by brother was on my account. He tries to get me banned."
Yeah,Suuuuuure he does >,> |
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CapRex213
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:08 PM |
| No seriously. Epik win poem. |
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:08 PM |
| Sun: The derps that I posted were from me, however, one time me cousin got on my account and got me a 7 day ban |
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Kianan
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:13 PM |
1. Deeeeeeeeeeerp 2. In my opinion...fail. Poems are rather boring just cause...well...they're poems. |
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x3pro
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:28 PM |
| Awesome poem. And Kianan , nu. This ish great poem! |
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GoldLava
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GoldLava
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| 28 Apr 2010 12:31 PM |
| Its okay, but the title sounds... like a catastrophe. |
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