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Re: CAN YOU PLS RATE CAFE!

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oldsoman77 is online. oldsoman77
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28 Nov 2017 09:31 PM
1-5 how good, and tell me WHY if you choose this rating.
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oldsoman77 is online. oldsoman77
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28 Nov 2017 09:34 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/1131267771/93ts-Place-Number-3


This is the cafe. Tell me what needs to be added or improved.
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SS_Destiny is not online. SS_Destiny
Joined: 23 Mar 2015
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28 Nov 2017 10:32 PM
First critique:

The cafe is too big. The roof is too high. I understand that you wanted to make it a two-story concept but the spacing could be changed.

The cafe is very blocky. It has no round shapes or unions.

The stoves are unnecessary considering that frying coffee isn't the best idea.

The fridge is the size of a small house which I recommend should be changed to an actual human sized proportion.

If you apply these changed I think your cafe will look much better and smoother.



"I'm just writing this to sound smart" -Me
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oldsoman77 is online. oldsoman77
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29 Nov 2017 03:19 PM
Yeah, but what should I smoothen out?
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SS_Destiny is not online. SS_Destiny
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29 Nov 2017 06:20 PM
Change the design of all the buildings' interior. Make tables and chairs have cylinders. Get some spheres into some of the decor.
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Riotix is not online. Riotix
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29 Nov 2017 06:25 PM
3/10. Lack of detail, shape, depth, etc.


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