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R_qD is online. R_qD
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24 Nov 2017 07:21 PM
First attempt at making a cafe. Only first floor is complete. I need thoughts so I can perfect my build as much as possible.

https://www.roblox.com/games/935161545/Work


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R_qD is online. R_qD
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24 Nov 2017 07:29 PM
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24 Nov 2017 11:32 PM
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magical555 is not online. magical555
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24 Nov 2017 11:57 PM
i like the way you use gaps

i don't like your use of colors, however - unless you're going for a plain theme, keep doing what you're doing

speaking about the plain theme, try to avoid square plots when you're making a building. it's fine to have them here and there, but those are usually buildings where people won't have much interaction with
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R_qD is online. R_qD
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25 Nov 2017 12:05 AM
What types of color combinations would you suggest?


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magical555 is not online. magical555
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25 Nov 2017 12:10 AM
making a color scheme is your choice. you gotta mess around to see what works (and also, consider changing ambient too - it changes the tones of brick colors)

however, i find builds with colors that contrast each other extremely don't work most of the time.
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Nemanoz is not online. Nemanoz
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25 Nov 2017 12:11 AM
okay, take what you're currently doing


and dont do that
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R_qD is online. R_qD
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25 Nov 2017 12:13 AM
Thanks to Magical for actually giving constructive criticism.


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25 Nov 2017 12:16 AM
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JasOwns is online. JasOwns
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25 Nov 2017 01:52 AM
Great concept. I love the style of the building. The bricks in the building supports on the corners look amazing.

Something I would suggest is more detail inside/out. Tables, lights, ordering station, etc.. If you were just working on the building itself, then ignore what I just said.

All in all, keep doing what you're doing!
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R_qD is online. R_qD
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25 Nov 2017 10:34 PM
maybe more


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foxylady567 is not online. foxylady567
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25 Nov 2017 10:53 PM
so i played your game and it was nort complete xD and the furniturs look realistic but its not like a cafe or something because it doesnt looks like it D: well its because you didnt finished it...you made me feel so bad because your way better then me on building things so keep uup your good work! :D
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