R_qD
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| 24 Nov 2017 07:21 PM |
First attempt at making a cafe. Only first floor is complete. I need thoughts so I can perfect my build as much as possible.
https://www.roblox.com/games/935161545/Work
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R_qD
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| 24 Nov 2017 11:57 PM |
i like the way you use gaps
i don't like your use of colors, however - unless you're going for a plain theme, keep doing what you're doing
speaking about the plain theme, try to avoid square plots when you're making a building. it's fine to have them here and there, but those are usually buildings where people won't have much interaction with |
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R_qD
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| 25 Nov 2017 12:05 AM |
What types of color combinations would you suggest?
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| 25 Nov 2017 12:10 AM |
making a color scheme is your choice. you gotta mess around to see what works (and also, consider changing ambient too - it changes the tones of brick colors)
however, i find builds with colors that contrast each other extremely don't work most of the time. |
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Nemanoz
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| 25 Nov 2017 12:11 AM |
okay, take what you're currently doing
and dont do that
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R_qD
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| 25 Nov 2017 12:13 AM |
Thanks to Magical for actually giving constructive criticism.
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Nemanoz
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JasOwns
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| 25 Nov 2017 01:52 AM |
Great concept. I love the style of the building. The bricks in the building supports on the corners look amazing.
Something I would suggest is more detail inside/out. Tables, lights, ordering station, etc.. If you were just working on the building itself, then ignore what I just said.
All in all, keep doing what you're doing! |
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| 25 Nov 2017 10:53 PM |
| so i played your game and it was nort complete xD and the furniturs look realistic but its not like a cafe or something because it doesnt looks like it D: well its because you didnt finished it...you made me feel so bad because your way better then me on building things so keep uup your good work! :D |
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