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Re: Feedback on Showcase so Far

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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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01 Nov 2017 08:57 PM
Possibly an entry for EBR, only thing is, i'm not liking it as it doesn't have much detail, due to it being the certain building genre it is I can't add much detail, unlike gothic buildings, so i'm most likely not going to use this, but feedback would still be very nice.


https://www.roblox.com/games/1141293756/unnamed



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cbsqueast is online. cbsqueast
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01 Nov 2017 09:06 PM
really nice, i suggest making the rain sound effect a little less loud.
also don't copy+paste that much, for the windows there's a lot of copy and paste

by the way, you don't have to follow the building genre you're doing exactly. you can add whatever you want as long as it looks good


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WoodFlare is not online. WoodFlare
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01 Nov 2017 09:07 PM
super cool, reminds me of tot3m
with that style, keeping map design condensed is a great way to make it feel more detailed + functionality (light switches working, lights flickering, small things like that) are very good on an entry


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masterreblex is not online. masterreblex
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01 Nov 2017 09:19 PM
Just showcase a story with your building and no words and you'll get accepted.
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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01 Nov 2017 09:37 PM
Alright, thanks for the feedback i'll be sure to look out for those.
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Scottifly is online. Scottifly
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01 Nov 2017 10:22 PM
It's a good quality build, it would just need to be bigger with a sense of story or emotion behind it.
If you continue with this or other another build to a completed state then submit it to me and I'll take a look to see if can be submitted to the other EBR members.
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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01 Nov 2017 10:49 PM
Yeah, definitely will do. I just started a couple days ago, so i haven't gotten to go in depth with the story. I'm planning on making more 3D graffiti art to tell a hidden story.
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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02 Nov 2017 12:45 AM
Bump :)
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REKIN is not online. REKIN
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02 Nov 2017 01:09 AM
I love it!
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REKIN is not online. REKIN
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02 Nov 2017 01:10 AM
The lo-fi works so well with this haha
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02 Nov 2017 01:13 AM
How'd you make those decals glow?
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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02 Nov 2017 01:20 AM
That's because they're not decals, it's a mesh(.fbx), and glad you like it so far!
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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02 Nov 2017 03:40 AM
Bump.
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ThatsSomeGreenTea is online. ThatsSomeGreenTea
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02 Nov 2017 06:05 AM
I scripted it, just btw...lol


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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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02 Nov 2017 11:33 AM
You sound socially awkward
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03 Nov 2017 10:46 AM
You sound alone


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03 Nov 2017 11:01 AM
Dammit Baylor
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Klovod is not online. Klovod
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14 Nov 2017 10:07 PM
Looks good, fix the lighting.


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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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16 Nov 2017 01:10 AM
Lighting settings were disabled so I can build with ease.
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17 Nov 2017 02:46 PM
Wich song is that?


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17 Nov 2017 02:55 PM
PLEASE TELL ME I'm ADDICTED TO THE SONG...


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ThatsSomeGreenTea is online. ThatsSomeGreenTea
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19 Nov 2017 02:44 PM
ako - tickle me gently


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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
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19 Nov 2017 05:31 PM
tickle me pickle
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ManiacalGvhv is not online. ManiacalGvhv
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22 Nov 2017 12:02 PM
I,would love to help with the showcase.
I don't even think it's possible i just wan't to be part of the project.
Not even in the description/credits.
It would be a pleasure if i could help too.
:D


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ManiacalGvhv is not online. ManiacalGvhv
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22 Nov 2017 12:05 PM
I,would understand that i can't be part of the showcase.
It was just a little idea.
To see how a pro-builder builds showcases.
Well,bye for now.
I would be happy to be part of it though.


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