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Re: Written Lore for PG

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Exkeon is online. Exkeon
Joined: 20 May 2017
Total Posts: 220
07 Nov 2017 09:56 AM
Honestly, this is the first time I've ever written a bit of lore. If there is anything wrong please do point it out. I made this for fun, and I saw xChris Dolmeth a friend write up a huge lore 12 page stuff for his great clan Wasteland Ravagers (Which you should totally check out). It inspired me to make something for my group.

I wrote this mainly for fun and to establish something pretty cool.
I worked hard on it, so if you guys have any constructive criticism I'd appreciate!

Wanderer's pass around broken cities, broken lands... Scraps of the war lay waste to the "Project Supremacy". Breaking free of the tidal waves of the controlling :\\ ORIGIN //:
War has been won, but a supremacy, became a oligarchy. Through the ashes of waste, and the joke of the project taking place. Wanderer's rebuild a home called "Fortified Island."
There the oligarchy quickly became stronger. Rose through the ashes to prevail.
The wanderer's each settled on leaders, ultimately settling on Exkeon as the command.
Hostiles quickly spread the word on the force as :\\ ORIGIN //: rebuilt.
Attackers swept in fast, each disarmed throughout the years.
Wanderer's quickly established the group, "-Project Game-".

I believe I did decent. I know a lot of people like to make fun of my clan's name since we are a building / military clan, I myself think it's a creative fun twist for a group.
I know a lot of people are going to post "WHY ARE NOOB CLANS POSTING NOW AAA." but, let it be.

Hopefully you guys could give some constructive criticism.


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Catman_Rules is online. Catman_Rules
Joined: 14 Nov 2011
Total Posts: 124
07 Nov 2017 09:59 AM
PG SUPREME! -Cat Soldiers.
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Dio_Dragon is not online. Dio_Dragon
Joined: 26 Mar 2016
Total Posts: 7
07 Nov 2017 10:02 AM
MM: "This battle has already chosen us as our successor before you even fought." or "Like the ashes we were before, we shall rise up and burn you."
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xXxNoobArmyxXx is not online. xXxNoobArmyxXx
Joined: 03 Nov 2016
Total Posts: 18
07 Nov 2017 10:04 AM
Honestly not bad. But you need to make something longer, why were wanderer's there?
What did they establish, and why? To protect their home?

It's not bad for your first rodeo.

PG supreme!
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DubberSmash is not online. DubberSmash
Joined: 11 Dec 2016
Total Posts: 4
07 Nov 2017 10:28 AM
"Rose from the ashes to prevail!" PG Supreme!!!
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Partherus is online. Partherus
Joined: 04 May 2013
Total Posts: 11
07 Nov 2017 11:38 AM
PG Supreme!


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Exkeon is online. Exkeon
Joined: 20 May 2017
Total Posts: 220
07 Nov 2017 11:42 AM
Thanks for the support.
I was seriously expecting some troll post's.

PG supreme!


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