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| 02 Nov 2017 07:49 PM |
Hello State Of Firestone! I am ilordgaming. I am running for County Council! I want to tell some stuff about me. I have been on roblox for 4 almost 5 years. I have had a lot of experience with this feild work. Thats why i am running today. I want to show you that i can be good with people and show i know how to be a bigger person. I want to say some experiences. --I have been a mayor, Governor, And City Council.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Stuff i tell my self, Never give up. Be positive. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Why you Should vote for me!
You should vote for me because i have the experience to help the county. I have never had problems. I will play the county oncw its out of beta! I will be on 1 to 3 hours at a time i will make sure everyone is happy with me in office. Vote me for County Council! I dont ignore you like some people.
I need your support to make it happen!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Signed, ILordgaming
#Lord4Council
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| 03 Nov 2017 06:10 AM |
| So, now. Check your spelling and grammar. |
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| 03 Nov 2017 04:06 PM |
| I'm gonna be honest here, this looks very poorly made. My advice, make a new speech. |
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| 03 Nov 2017 04:24 PM |
Good in theory, I'll be honest, poorly executed. Here's a few tips that should go a long way for you.
1] Make a new speech. Spellcheck it. Double Spellcheck it. ***Include any ideas on what you may want to do.
2] Explain what you did in your previous offices, and how you can use those experiences and apply them as a County Councilor.
3] Take out the "Stuff I tell myself" section, and use that in wall posts to build up other people.
4] Join a Political Party.
5] Share your discord and reach out to people.
Do some of these, and you'll have my, and likely many others support. |
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| 03 Nov 2017 05:43 PM |
| Thank you all for the advice. Ill take it for the next time. I dont have time for a new speech. I will be dropping out of elections. |
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