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| 30 Oct 2017 10:33 AM |
I am selling an old street with nearly abandoned apartments. There is no inside to them, as if you play the showcase, the doors and windows are bordered up, but there is still light inside, so people are living there, as I said, it's an almost abandoned 'street' of apartments. You can play it by going to my profile and clicking 'Creations', and join from there. Add me on Discord, TheRealXoticPlays#1364, and from there we can come up with a negotiable price. |
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H4x0ne
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:23 PM |
| I've checked it out, and, wow. It's amazing. I'm not wishing to buy it, though, I just wanted to say that it looks amazing. I see potential in the future for you. |
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H4x0ne
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:29 PM |
| Not sure why people are hating on it, though. |
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:37 PM |
| I fell like you couldn really sell it good. I mean it looks good but it's too small and.. A bit out of quality. |
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:42 PM |
It's bad. The detalization is lazy and that can be seen by looking at the windows. Ladders are supposed to be thin, this is not 2006. I also managed to see some glitchy texture behind the planks that are supposed to cover a hole (lazy too).
I did not really memorize it that well,but that is like a half of things wrong. It is good for you,since you are a 2017'er afterall. Keep up and you should improve.
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H4x0ne
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:48 PM |
| Dude, I'm with Menace for this one. Who said ladders had to be thin? Can you not tell by the title? 'OLD'. I see what you mean by the glitches a #### ### apart from that, it's not that bad. I've seen behind the planks, and there's nothing wrong. He hasn't lacked detail, he's added bloodstains in the windows and alongside the walls, he's added in nails and the planks, and he's changed the windows (changing their angle and taking things off them). Like I said, I have to agree with you on the glitches. But the detalization isn't lazy, in my opinion, and the windows are fairly detailed too. |
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:51 PM |
I have things to compare with,and that is lazy. He has details such as blood, but just slapping a blood stain on to a wall does not make it better.
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H4x0ne
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:52 PM |
| Alright, that is true. But can you tell me what he was lazy with? |
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:54 PM |
Rotating stuff does not make it better too,if he were to make it detalized,he could atleast make the number of planks at windows different. I will give points for nails,but THEY could be rotated and even make some be on the ground. That would give him an option to make planks hanging or even be on the ground too.
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:57 PM |
Holes are too square-ish,they look unnatural and also,there is only one type of a hole. Also,why would a ladder not be thin? Like I said,this is not 2006, ladders are supposed to be THIN,the fact that it has OLD in the title does not mean it is supposed to represent 2006,it is supposed to represent that thing street is forgotten, run-down and broken.
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:57 PM |
Alright, guys, thanks for the feedback. I appreciate criticism, as from that, I can learn from my mistakes, and learn on what to improve on. I'm going to start updating it now, thanks!
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| 30 Oct 2017 12:59 PM |
No problem,I enjoy seeing people that can accept harsh criticizm and improve themselves.
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| 30 Oct 2017 01:12 PM |
| Oh, and I was meant to imply that yes, the street is forgotten, and also that is actually old. Sorry for the mix up! |
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