Paceh
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| 12 Sep 2017 03:59 PM |
| https://www.roblox.com/games/986637981/Penthouse The only thing thats free model is the #### the money and the gumball machine, but i might remove those stuff But anyways rate from 1-10 pls |
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Paceh
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:00 PM |
| Also, its not done yet, im adding more decore stuff, animations etc |
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Paceh
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:01 PM |
| Oh wait, i forgot 1 thing the clothes rack is also free model soz |
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:15 PM |
sorry, but the entire place looks pretty dull and flat because of the lighting. it's too uniform and white, on top of the fact that the walls and floors are basically empty.
also, the colour scheme isn't very interesting. everything is either black, white or grey. maybe you're going for that sort of style, but i don't encourage it. try making the walls white and the furniture either a brighter colour or a pastel colour.
gotta give credit for your proportions though, your furniture and doorways have proper sizes. |
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:16 PM |
| Thx for that information, i'm not done at all tho, and ik its pretty empty but im still thinking of what stuff i should add, do you have any suggestions what to add in the empty spaces? |
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:24 PM |
| have you tried downscaling instead of making large rooms? using smaller rooms will work better with the lighting, and will feel much more comfy. (it's also less work and you will make progress a lot faster) but, if you wanna go for larger rooms, i'd suggest going for higher cellings, but this won't look good in all rooms. it's just a trail and error thing, but colour will really enhance the appearance of the place. making ### #### a differnt colour (probably either some sort of pastel green or a brighter colour) will also break the pattern on the walls a bit more. if you wanna make ### #### a different colour, it'd suggest the large wall in the ''living room'' section. if you make the furniture orange and the wall behind it blue, you got a nice complimentary colour scheme, but maybe it won't really work out. |
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| 12 Sep 2017 04:26 PM |
looks like roblox decided to screw with the layout of my reply.
fine! i don't need it anyway. no paragraph are better anyway! |
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