v_ile
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| 03 Sep 2017 03:22 PM |
This wasn't well received last time, because some people don't know what a conifer forest is. But anyway... I need some input on things I should change and add... I am not done. Hence the name, "WIP" I'm going to add flowers and bushes next then finish the barn and add a mountain of some sort. This has taken me 7 hours so far so bear with me.
https://www.roblox.com/games/1012242338/Forest-Showcase-WIP |
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v_ile
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| 03 Sep 2017 03:24 PM |
| (I built everything myself. No free models or team create, no custom meshes.) |
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| 03 Sep 2017 03:37 PM |
| I saw your other forum and saw the feedback you got. It was pretty harsh. Personally I like it so far. It looks clean but a lot of things can be added instead of just an on going path with rocks, grass, and tress. Add a waterfall, caves, and a more interactive environment. But so far good job. |
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v_ile
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| 03 Sep 2017 04:00 PM |
@blingmcqueen
Thank you for the input I was thinking about doing a water fall but I don't think triangle terrain is good for waterfalls. Just doesn't blend well. After my next project after this I think I'll have a water fall in there somewhere. And I would also like to have a more interactive environment. I would have to get some extra GUI in there as well. |
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| 03 Sep 2017 04:30 PM |
| The best thing you could do is to not make everything in a single flat base, give it depth. |
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| 03 Sep 2017 04:32 PM |
| I will take note of that! Thanks! |
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NovixHD
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| 03 Sep 2017 04:32 PM |
Not bad! I would work on the lighting though.
#Code print("Hello Forumers") |
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| 03 Sep 2017 04:34 PM |
Well built. Just needs to be more dynamic.
...and thats why yellow makes me sad |
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| 04 Sep 2017 08:55 PM |
"explore"
can't move/everything is blurry
nice
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| 04 Sep 2017 08:58 PM |
@wow
Did you click explore? |
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Wowgnomes
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| 04 Sep 2017 09:00 PM |
no remove that or make it time itself out i wouldn't have known to click
add more gnomes
add a section of 'dead' trees/grass to give it a unique feel, most showcases don't do that
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Aexleo
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| 04 Sep 2017 09:27 PM |
Great showcase.
Although the plants i've seen them before in one free model. Unless you just copied the design of it. |
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| 04 Sep 2017 09:39 PM |
@Aexleo
I didn't use free models and I used the leaf design off of one of them but I changed it. I build it though. |
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