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iHypered is not online. iHypered
Joined: 09 Nov 2010
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26 Aug 2017 02:15 AM
first building since awhile, rate it. i know terrain is terrible, ignore that, i just placed it on auto generated

https://www.roblox.com/games/1003970347/iHypereds-Place-Number-315


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iHypered is not online. iHypered
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26 Aug 2017 10:57 AM
b, want to know where to improve, not just in destroyed houses but if you notice something if this were a normal house


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motlopoway is not online. motlopoway
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26 Aug 2017 11:03 AM
you cant go inside 4/10
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Ocks67 is not online. Ocks67
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26 Aug 2017 11:16 AM
Serious lack of debris all around and inside.
The roof being full doesn't make sense. I never saw an attic filled with concrete.
Having a bunch of clean cutted holes like that doesn't look nice either.
Windows don't break like that.

Have some wall sections caved in, a concrete coating over the bricks so the bricks are more like an underneath material. Damaged sections show the brick pattern while the undamaged sections look plain.
Don't make it a square building. Give it some sections or an L-shaped form.
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iHypered is not online. iHypered
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26 Aug 2017 11:22 AM
i have a question with the square house thing, since ive seen a lot of square buildings, if i were to have a lot of houses in a game or map, not all being destroyed, would it be okay to have ################ ## ################ ###### buildings to give it variety?
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iHypered is not online. iHypered
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26 Aug 2017 11:24 AM
a few square buildings to give it a variety. also, i wasnt sure about the brick design when i started it, are the bricks okay (besides the unioned ones)?


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Ocks67 is not online. Ocks67
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26 Aug 2017 11:29 AM
I said the sahpe doesn't look nice because honestly it just looks like a box.
Maybe if you'd ''fix that'' the square house wouldn't be a problem.
The brick pattern doesn't look nice for a couple reasons:
Bricks too big, weird corners, just too repetitive.
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iHypered is not online. iHypered
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26 Aug 2017 11:32 AM
ok, thanks for your feedback


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ScriptSkull is not online. ScriptSkull
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26 Aug 2017 11:33 AM
1/10
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iHypered is not online. iHypered
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26 Aug 2017 11:41 AM
for same reasons as ocks said or is there anything else?


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