iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 02:15 AM |
first building since awhile, rate it. i know terrain is terrible, ignore that, i just placed it on auto generated
https://www.roblox.com/games/1003970347/iHypereds-Place-Number-315
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iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 10:57 AM |
b, want to know where to improve, not just in destroyed houses but if you notice something if this were a normal house
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Ocks67
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:16 AM |
Serious lack of debris all around and inside. The roof being full doesn't make sense. I never saw an attic filled with concrete. Having a bunch of clean cutted holes like that doesn't look nice either. Windows don't break like that.
Have some wall sections caved in, a concrete coating over the bricks so the bricks are more like an underneath material. Damaged sections show the brick pattern while the undamaged sections look plain. Don't make it a square building. Give it some sections or an L-shaped form. |
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iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:22 AM |
| i have a question with the square house thing, since ive seen a lot of square buildings, if i were to have a lot of houses in a game or map, not all being destroyed, would it be okay to have ################ ## ################ ###### buildings to give it variety? |
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iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:24 AM |
a few square buildings to give it a variety. also, i wasnt sure about the brick design when i started it, are the bricks okay (besides the unioned ones)?
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Ocks67
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:29 AM |
I said the sahpe doesn't look nice because honestly it just looks like a box. Maybe if you'd ''fix that'' the square house wouldn't be a problem. The brick pattern doesn't look nice for a couple reasons: Bricks too big, weird corners, just too repetitive. |
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iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:32 AM |
ok, thanks for your feedback
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iHypered
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| 26 Aug 2017 11:41 AM |
for same reasons as ocks said or is there anything else?
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