Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:40 PM |
This will be a thread to show what we have made so far. It will show a bit of the basic plot, a major city, many races, and a battle. This is a literate rpg. Meaning good spelling and grammer are a must. We've been working hard on this stuff, so come and see what we've done. Mind that this is medieval! ___________________________________________________________________________
The Battle of Tiran ___________________________________________________________________________
Tiran is under attack by the Chaotic forces. Tiran is a simple city, not known for it's warfare. More for it's literature and libraries.
Name: Tiran Landmarks: Roads coming in and out from all directions. On the outside of town, statues of the races whose kingdoms and empires border the territory circle the town. General Appearance: A large town in neutral territory bordered by many major kingdoms and empires. Many shops, bookstores, schools, and a large library. Roads come into the city from all directions. Importance: A Center of Commerce and Learning. ___________________________________________________________________________
Races so far (Some may not be in here. I apologize if I missed a few.):
Name: Shaera. Male/Female/Both: Both. Life-Span: Approximately 200 Years. Attributes: Their red eyes, shadowy black flesh, and ability to manipulate their bodies. General Appearance: About one-and-a-half times the height of an Aller. Their skin is black as shadow. Their eyes, a crimson that can destroy the courage of anyone who looks into them. In their standard form; they have clawed hands and clawed feet as well. They are usually extremely muscular. Even if they take another form; they usually remain fairly pale, and their eyes still retain a hue of red. History: They have a long history, strewn with the blood of their enemies. They are an extremely advanced and warlike race. From the beginning, they waged war on the other races; and that never changed. Religion: They worship no god; some even believe that they are gods.
Name: Aller. Male/Female/Both: Both. Life-Span: 50-70 years. Attributes: Are about average in everything. A hardy people. Neutral. General Appearance: They vary. Usually between 1 and 1.5 metres at full height. The typical human-type race. History: Pretty uneventful history. Religion: No religion. (Yet.)
Name: Refean. Male/Female/Both: Both. Life-Span: 120-140 years. Attributes: Breathe underwater, extremely good at swimming, very intelligent. Neutral. General Appearance: They usually have green or blue skin, gills, and webbed hands and feet. History: They are extremely peaceful. If they took a side in the war, it could tip the scales. Religion: Worship the sea, and it's inhabitants.
Name: Scalen. Male/Female/Both: Both. Life-Span: 80-100 years. Attributes: Silent, fast, intelligent. Venom in claws and fangs. Chaotic. General Appearance: Think Allers, but a bit taller, with snake-like heads, bodies covered in scales, lizard-like feet, clawed hands, and long, scaled, sinuous tails. History: They have always worked with the Shaera. Religion: Worship the Shaera.
Name: Scalen Inquisitors. Male/Female/Both: Female. Life-Span: 170-190 years. Attributes: Same as Scalen, and extremely strong. They can also charm men. General Appearance: Think the typical Scalen, but from the torso down, a long, thick snakelike tail instead of legs. These tails are usually from four to five meters long. History: Inquisitors are extremely rare. Very few are alive, and they are born about one every five hundred years. They are royalty to their people. Religion: Same as Scalen.
Name: The Sheklan (Same in Plural) Male/Female/Both: Both Life-Span: 150-160 years. Attributes: Weak in magic but Master warriors and good blacksmiths. Can stand extreme heat and extreme cold. Have Enhanced strength compared to other races. Lawful. General Appearance: Light blue skin. Scaly hands with claws (Have opposable thumbs) but rest of body is skin. Moderately tall and slightly stocky build. Muscular. History: Have defeated many races in wars, but are just and respectful of other races and religions. Nearly wiped out 1000 years ago by plague, but have had a major comeback. Religion: Since the Sheklan can endure extreme cold and extreme heat, they believe they were created in a joint effort of the Ice God Shekara and the Fire God Lanerus. They worship these gods at The Sheklan Ring. ___________________________________________________________________________
Name: Age: (Age they appear to be.) Race: Appearance: Bio: ___________________________________________________________________________
Name: Mal-Arick. (Mal-ARICK) Age: 23. Race: Aller/Shaera. Appearance: A tall Aller, about 1.4 metres, with extremely pale skin and red eyes. Of course, underneath that, he is a Shaera, so he can manipulate his body. He has a slight build, like most Allers, and is quite muscular. Really, if you didn't notice his eyes, which you probably won't due to his usually wearing a long, hooded, black cloak, he would look like a normal Aller. Bio: A high ranking Shaera, but often disrespected due to his Aller heritage. He is brutally efficient, like all Shaera, but deep inside, has his Aller emotions; compassion, pity, regret, sorrow, and more. He keeps them buried, however. He is extremely intelligent, and is quite a powerful fighter, although his Aller half slightly limits his transformational abilities.
Name: Shearoah. (Shay-ROA) Age: 21. Race: Scalen Inquisitor. Appearance: Tall upper half, with bright green scales. Her claws are quite long, and are secreted with venom, as are her teeth. Her lower half, the long snake part, is quite thick, and a massive eight metres long; the longest for an Inquisitor to date. She has lime-green eyes, and is considered extremely attractive for a Scalen. Bio: She is Mal-Arick's escort. She is also the closest thing he has to a friend. They had been friends since childhood. She is also the only person who accepts his half-Aller, half-Shaera heritage. She is quite kind, for a Scalen, but will do what it takes to get the job done. |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:42 PM |
| We've been working on this for a while now. Come in and see how good it is. |
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jks1
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:45 PM |
| Yes It's here! And my race is in the Race List! I have to go for now, but I might be on later. I hope to cya! |
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TAKER38
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:48 PM |
Name: Dakitions. Male/Female/Both: Male. Life-Span: 150-170. Attributes: They are easily tricked by love and are often killed due to it. General Appearance: Brown eyes and a human face, the only thing different from a human is they have more hate and depression History: They are allies with the Dagons (A race to be posted later) and helped build the dock city (Which is not available in the preview). Religion: None. |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:50 PM |
| We've waited a long time for this, so post. |
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TAKER38
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Firruu
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:56 PM |
| Good job. Make a character please. And no other Inquisitors please. They're supposed to be extremely rare. And no other Shaera/Aller hybrids. |
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TAKER38
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:58 PM |
Name:Tiaros Age: 15 Race:dakitions Appearance:He wears red armor and jeans(well this is kinda random but) Bio:he was coming with a master to buy books but found the battle coming at him head on and he could only be ready to kill |
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| 19 Jun 2009 07:59 PM |
Name: On'ach Age: 125 Race: Brinon Appearance: An old Brinon, wears an ancient robe and always holds Book of Brinon Laws Bio: Leader of the Brinon, can solve almost anything without thinking, very weak in body, but very strong in mind, On'ach can do what he pleases. He is a peaceful person and would not harm even an insect. |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:00 PM |
| (Jeans? Just go with pants, because jeans are modern.) |
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TAKER38
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:04 PM |
Name: Aelreick (Ale-Rick) Age: 25 Race: Aller Appearance: An Average Sized Aller Male, he has Blue Eyes and Blonde Hair. He wears Slightly Rusted and Damaged Shinteel Armour which is not Quite as Reliable as it was when it's previous owner had it. Bio: An Aller Paladin who has been chasing this Course for 10 Years. He wears Shinteel Armour that has been passed down and wields a normal Steel Sword. |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:04 PM |
(I will always be role-playing from Mal-Arick's prespective.)
I walked into the city. The screams and shouts of the dying and injured filled me. My Aller half told me to help them, but my Shaera half told me to finish them. My Shaera half won. I turned my arms into blades and walked into the chaos. Shearoah was close behind me, brandishing dual blades. |
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:04 PM |
| ( i like the the shearas but ummm is there anyway i can be one without destroying peoples courage???? sorry but thats one obstacle i've yet to figure how to get around.... ) |
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TAKER38
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:06 PM |
| I stabbed an oncoming enemy attacking Tiren.I flipped one and stabbed the head splattering the insides all of the ground.I turned up and looked forward at the oncoming onslaught |
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:07 PM |
| I saw what looked like a fellow Aller and began to run towards him, then noticed his arms and stopped dead as I noticed his arms were blades. I drew my sword and prepared to defend myself. |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:07 PM |
(It doesn't literally do that. It just means that the eyes scare people, because Shaeras usually kill people, and that's their main feature.)
I cut down several enemies. They were weak. Scholars, with no combat training. Shearoah fared equally well. |
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TAKER38
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:09 PM |
| I stabbed an oncoming enemy and struck my sword through the heart.I pulled my sword out and cut another enemy in half.This was too easy |
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:11 PM |
| I watched him kill the Scholars and Rage Grew within me. I charged madly at him. I wasn't thinking. |
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TAKER38
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:13 PM |
| i turned to someone charging.I hustled after but stopped in my tracked.There was a beautiful women right behind the charging guy and the enemy.I just stood there |
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Firruu
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:14 PM |
(My internet is slow right now, so give me time to post.)
I saw a man charging at me. I lowered my body into a defensive position. He didn't look like he was a trained warrior. |
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| 19 Jun 2009 08:16 PM |
Name: Lye Age: 22 Race: Aller Appearance: Brown hair, green eyes, wears a black jacket and a white shirt underneath, and wears brown pants. Bio: Is a good fighter but doesn't like wars. Travelled to Tiran not knowing a fight was going on. |
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