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Foxzes is not online. Foxzes
Joined: 26 Aug 2015
Total Posts: 534
07 Aug 2017 07:30 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/966202270/Call-of-duty-Dab-on-the-haters

Any and all feedback is much appreciated!

Thanks,

Foxzes


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Lickablefun is online. Lickablefun
Joined: 12 May 2012
Total Posts: 117
07 Aug 2017 07:44 PM
Okay, here we go. I'll rate you on your build from things I have noticed. The score is first 0, but can lower/raise from things I notice.

I am a bit confused on the stairs, but I'm just guessing that it is on a hill and near a lake.

+1 For creating your first modern house. It is nice to see that you tried, and you deserve more credit for it being your first build.
+1 For design. It is original for the fact that it is in a different enviroment, and that I haven't seen this anywhere else before. It definitely resembles a modern house.
+1 For all the basic rooms. I didn't notice any type of bathroom, as I wouldn't really expect open spaces to look through, but other than that you did well with basic rooms.
-1 for stair design. The first set of stairs by the dock is supported, but the second isn't. The stairs are basically floating in mid air on that part of it. Also, the whole stairs itself doesn't have much support.
-1 For docks. Nothing is keeping the boat there, so if it was on water, logically it would be floating away from no tied end to the docks. Waves can be powerful.
+1 For No Outline. I'm not sure if you made the surface smooth or not, but it seems as there is barely an outline.
+1 For building the frame first. I can tell that you first started out by the actual house and foundation, instead of diving in room after room with adding design.

I rate you 3/10. It sounds harsh, but that is how I use my rating system. I think you did very well, and without the cons you would be rated 5/10 in my opinion. I could only spot 2 mistakes, and I tried to ### ## much detail as possible, while understanding this house is still being built.
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rich_tofen is not online. rich_tofen
Joined: 19 Mar 2016
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07 Aug 2017 07:49 PM
Stairs could use alot more detail and work.

The structure of the house looks great, but sometimes the structure isn't everything. When you start designing the interior, put a lot of detail. Because it looks like you are really slacking of it.


Doing good so far tho


A.K.A MasterTrollPwnz [Add 3K to my Post Count] richtofen#1077
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Foxzes is not online. Foxzes
Joined: 26 Aug 2015
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07 Aug 2017 08:00 PM
The second flight on stairs are going to rest upon land, so it doesn't need support ## ################ ## I'm aware Interior hasn't even been started yet, Thanks for all the feedback y'all
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Foxzes is not online. Foxzes
Joined: 26 Aug 2015
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07 Aug 2017 08:05 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/954101343/Uhmm

It goes here, the one in this link is very outdated though


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Lickablefun is online. Lickablefun
Joined: 12 May 2012
Total Posts: 117
07 Aug 2017 08:13 PM
Then that -1 is now a +1, which means your rating is 4/10, and without cons it is 6/10. That was my fault, sorry.

It looks great!
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Foxzes is not online. Foxzes
Joined: 26 Aug 2015
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07 Aug 2017 08:26 PM
Its not your fault you didn't know, I just linked it without the other one.




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