Joz2015
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:49 PM |
~ chapter 1 ~
only minutes after tbc_jack fell onto the ground, police lights began to flash outside of the arched windows of the wealthy, noble mansion he was murdered in.
the door of one of the cruisers opened, and detective evilgnomejared walked out, his loaded and ready glock 17 in the pocket of his trenchcoat.
ducking through a long stretch of police tape, he walked into the doors and knelt near the body.
"can't believe it. seems like the guy was polished off for dabbing."
behind him, officer rdonohoo988 entered the room.
"sorry i was late. i had to arrest some real girls for not acting like animated goth ones."
"i'm afraid we have a bigger crime on our hands, officer rdono."
rdono knelt beside jared. his eyes widened from shock.
"holy. do you think..?"
"yep. could've been xenopheryl or dehlia. both of them are known to waste people as harshly as this for petty reasons."
"just for a dab?"
evilgnomejared turned to rdono for a brief second before answering.
"dabs are pretty deprecated and cringey nowadays. you know that."
jared stood after kneeling at the body and turned at one of the swat officers standing nearby.
"officer joz, officer jeqy, and officer secret. i want this man taken to the lab for examination. after that, meet me in my office. i think i have a lead already."
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don't worry if you think that your role was too small or not as significant. there will be some plot twists and more about each character in the following chapters.
i'm not taking any more character requests, though. |
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:52 PM |
was i on the og list or no
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Joz2015
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:53 PM |
| @chubby technically no but will add next chapter because you were on the thread before it published |
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:53 PM |
also my humor is very ironic
and more about animated goth girls and goth girls pl0x |
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:55 PM |
oh thx
it's nice either way
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Joz2015
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:58 PM |
yey
leave a link when you are done with chapter 2 |
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TBC_Jack
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| 23 Jul 2017 06:59 PM |
| I was killed, great, i thought i could be a coral guy |
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Jeqy
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