|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:18 AM |
I see you everday Our eyes always meet.. But maybe im too shy To tell you my true feelings hidden deep inside my heart I know you're the one for mee The cute smile that rests upon you're face You're warm personality
When i look in to you're eyes i see not happiness or terror in you're eyes i see the strange peaceful twilight That attracts me to you So i'll tell you one more time... You are the one for me... |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:19 AM |
| story of my life dude im WAAAAAY too shy |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
| |
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:22 AM |
| may i have permission to copy this and send it to the one i love |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
| |
|
| |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:27 AM |
| Thanks for all nice replies. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:29 AM |
My love for you My love is strong and protected Nothing shall break the seal Of my heart. Not even the cruelest tings This world and all beyond have ever seen.
Love is the thing that keeps Life flowing So my message to you all Is that life is short So now is the time to tell you're loved ones how you feel. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:35 AM |
Bump again?!
Please post you're comments and suggestions for my poems. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:36 AM |
| idk what they need because they are so good |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
| |
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:38 AM |
now i just need to find a way to send it in secret
|
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:39 AM |
| .......Put it in her locker. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:44 AM |
I just don't notice anything rhyming. (I know little about poems, so if they do not have to rhyme, correct me.) |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:46 AM |
| Charlie they dont have to rhyme.. i dont think they do anyway... |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
logiscool
|
  |
| Joined: 22 Nov 2009 |
| Total Posts: 2999 |
|
| |
|
|
| 07 Mar 2010 10:47 AM |
| Okay, thanks. I know a little bit more know. xD. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|