Nemanoz
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| 26 Jun 2017 10:23 PM |
| dont actually want any constructive criticism, just want attention to ###### ## ego. kidding, but im just about to move on to the next part of this and i want to know what i should fix before i do so. |
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Nemanoz
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| 26 Jun 2017 10:24 PM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/877461694/Nemanozs-Place-Number-16
forgot to link it im dumb |
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Nemanoz
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pullman45
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| 26 Jun 2017 11:34 PM |
I like your building and use of fog and particles.
Why is there that zombie though? |
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Nemanoz
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| 26 Jun 2017 11:37 PM |
| used as a scale when im in studio |
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ReaIG
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Nemanoz
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ReaIG
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ReaIG
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cbsqueast
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| 26 Jun 2017 11:46 PM |
-i suggest you don't use triangle terrain. try using unions?
-island is oddly shaped and feels too big
-atmosphere is great
-for some reason the showcase feels like it's lacking something. maybe try adding a farm and a house
-the tree is dead and doesn't have much detail. the branches also extend too much
-is this not finished? |
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Nemanoz
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| 26 Jun 2017 11:52 PM |
Made all of this yesterday, save for the tree (which can be found here: https://www.roblox.com/games/845868358/The-Tree-of-Training)
was looking for small stuff to add/fix before i move on to the next, larger portion. thnx for feedback mang |
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MelonnStu
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| 27 Jun 2017 12:02 AM |
OKAY, ALRIGHT. I'LL TOTALLY PLAY IT.
Have you ever had that dream, that you could like, and you could and you, like could like, and do like, and like you like can like, do and be like, and like do whatever you wanted? |
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cbsqueast
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