Motuka
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| Joined: 06 Mar 2017 |
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| 13 Jun 2017 12:28 AM |
[Intro] I'm just feeling bad for him should we do it? well, we ain't come here for nothing we just gonna give him a lesson
[Verse-AllTime-A] Man don't be my judgment or I'll be like the kid who roasted the judgments grow the f00c up you immature parents Takin' notes on how to win, f00cin' students "4/10" Boi you serious? G.O.A.T is your dream to be Skrub, rap, you f00cin suck probably Killer stay uptown, Louden VA tree Tried to defend one o your friends, what a pity it was weak I'm in a rare breed, extraordinary league That's me with the few facts that I speak Then Bossip for gossip, YBF in concrete F00c you cracker, I put you six feet That’s why I strike first and the verse cuts deep I’m way harder than the concrete Your rates, I don't need your bull sh-- you can keep Crossed them powers or devoured in a heartbeat More clearer than the crystal sky, blue as the beast Come on Lara kill this weak
[Verse-Lara] Let me present myself "Bad girl" that's my name I like my hoodies f00ced with Lame Thoughts, cause you're an outsider tryna get in brain Can't control the box, you are no Millx Lane I'm that extreme, So haters complain But now invisible cells around your brain Just Plain Pat visions with some sick aim Come on we are waiting for your come backs Look around, fool, got a wall full of plaques Glad trash bags, throw them in the black bags In my own class, bzvtch I got them cold raps Go to heck, I mean that, burn you like green backs I'm a nightmare for duushe-bags Double-M G up, we up, y'all just relax
[Outro -Lara +AllTime-A] +Try us you gonna face the death -They at the same spot they making no progress +Odd Future leaving even skrubs in past tense -A coward dies a thousand deaths |
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motman5
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| Joined: 17 Nov 2011 |
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| 13 Jun 2017 12:31 AM |
| That outro was fire, good verses from both, I'd work on toning down the curses so less filtering, but besides that firey |
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KyLaQz
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| Joined: 09 Jun 2015 |
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| 13 Jun 2017 05:19 AM |
Outro gets a 8\10, fire. Whole songs gets a 7\10 tho, wasn't feelin' y'all. Seemed corny. |
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DoraKillz
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| Joined: 02 Mar 2016 |
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| 14 Jun 2017 12:12 AM |
| Ight, AllTime-A. We're friends, but... It was alright, let's just say that... The outro was 50%... 4.5/5 Tip: NEVER rap with the same word... Not hating, ya'll tried hard |
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DoraKillz
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| Joined: 02 Mar 2016 |
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