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| 26 May 2017 08:36 PM |
| Going 15k after taxes. Negotiable(barely). For an obby, it is pretty good. None of that smoothplastic crap, and never sold before. Worked on by two ##### devs, PaperCoyotee and TrippyPiggy. contains approx. 50 stages. 5 sections. Subway(train) themed, somewhat. Dscrd: TrippyPiggy #2488, no spaces. link: https://www.roblox.com/games/788344479/The-uh-subway-commission contact my discord for screenshots if you cant play. |
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| 27 May 2017 01:23 PM |
I'm not saying it is, but the game feels like you had a subway area built and then just threw lava all around it, it isn't unique. You used the copy and paste tool a lot.
There is no real direction with it either. I am forced to follow arrows due to invisible walls blocking obvious straightforward shots to the exit in the beginning, and it is just annoying. The subway setting just seems pointless because there doesn't seem to be a disaster or any story. It is just a subway with lava and lazers for some reason, not as unique as you think.
It isn't a very fun obby, I wouldn't pay 15k AFTER taxes. |
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| 27 May 2017 01:31 PM |
very accurate representation. nice.
i feel the same way actually, but the guy who paid us to make it (he never took the place) told us to do that stuff.
understandable, have a nice day.
nice games m8 |
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| 28 May 2017 05:13 PM |
@Trip
That's bad on the guy who made you waste your time. He should have compensated you in some way.
I would just try to sell it without the obby in the future. It is a nice build, the obby stuff takes away from it. |
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| 28 May 2017 07:51 PM |
| He gave me 80k in compensation |
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| 28 May 2017 11:12 PM |
I agree with Bobby, the scenery doesn't make much sense to me. Thanks for taking criticism instead of flaming by the way, that's something that only good developers like yourself would do.
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| 28 May 2017 11:33 PM |
| Yeet thanks for the feedback. Anything to get better. Once I'm back to this project I'm gonna fix everything and try again. |
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