DoraKillz
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| 22 May 2017 12:24 PM |
Beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Le0eZhl8Bg4
[Intro]
Child's Play ain't nothing... This is how a real diss look like... Look...
[Verse-1]
Stop tryna act G, when ya'll know, you a bunch of phonies. And with yo color, you repping that princess from My Little Pony? Taking a brown balla at yo dead members' grave. He was yo homies? Oh, so ya'll tryna diss Dash 'n Cap? I bet ya'll don't even GOTZ a strap. And our letter ya'll were talking about? Ya'll can give it to Deddo's gap. Oh snap, this a real diss. You must be harder if you could reply to this. And you know, ya'll can put up our letters. Oh, and tell ReCoil to start rapping better. And who df are Rocky and Baby Shotty? Speaking about GSFK? Is that what ya'll get in yo body? You already know our game, for you it's a shame. Hitting ya'll like Illuminati. How about Mydas? Well, whackest rapper ya'll has. In the gang wars? Man, ya'll can't shoot. Ya'll coming at KINGS. Too scared, so I see new, nooby, white recruits. And I can't take yo words as a diss. But this? This is what ya'll can't mess with!
[Hook]
FYB, LSB, Can't you see? Ya'll ain't G's, so don't act like these. Ya'll bunch of bustas, and of course cowards. And that diss ya'll made? Waste of hours. *X2*
[Verse-2]
Child's Play was... Word... Whack. And if you ever come at my boys again, ya'll gon' have to taste tha Mac. So, rest in pieces. GSF just increases. While yo so called gang decreases. It ain't my fault we kidnapping yo daughters 'n nieces. You already know who the weakest. Not sorry if my homies getting at yo queens. You know what that means... She gon' fall to her k neas. Only tease. ABZ, you don't king kong never gon' won how ride. And SSL, I can tell... Ya'll be crying outside. Ayo, SSC, remember when I killed the south side. And Jaylan tryna get to GSF, tryna rejoin. Probably 'cuz he either gonna threaten us, or maybe he just broke, and he gon' ask for an uniform and a coin. Meet me in the streets, so I could knock ya'll teeth out. So ya'll can't snitch, get rich, or speak out. And all tha paper we gon' take from you? Heck yeah, we count!
[Outro]
Take it as a diss, get mad, snitch, ya'll took an L, can't do nothing about it. Ya'll wanted to be in a purple Ro-Club? This is what happens if you mess with a Ro-Gang. I ain't no blood, I'm affiliated. Bompton in this... Throw up the coast... Who ya'll love the most? Damn right... WSP^ GSF^
Try to destroy me, you'll destroy yourself -YOUNG #99 |
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OGReCoil
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| 22 May 2017 02:20 PM |
LMFAO
>The format is garbage, so no one can read that.
>The song is self-contradictory towards yourselves
"I bet you don't even GOTZ a strap"
>On Roblox? What?
"Kidnapping yo daughters 'n nieces"
>....What?
"I ain't no blood, but I'm affiliated"
>Oh, I bet you are, buddy. Whole L.
I'll just leave the MTers to their job and clean up this trash. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) |
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| 22 May 2017 02:26 PM |
And how can you be the "Best of the Best" if you are #99?
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| 22 May 2017 02:29 PM |
| Responded rappad . co / rap / 427551 |
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| 22 May 2017 02:30 PM |
| format is trash, you pretentious ####### |
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DoraKillz
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| 23 May 2017 12:18 AM |
| That moment when ballas trippin' |
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Shyamos
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| 23 May 2017 02:26 AM |
doesn't flow at all on the beat, some lines have way too many syllables and others don't have enough (yes ik about overstepping bars or whatever its called but it doesn't work in this) not a lot of rhyming either step up ur game pls boi |
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DoraKillz
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| 23 May 2017 05:32 AM |
| ^ You're clearly not judging lyrics. I did rhyme tho. You're just rhyme-blind rn. And the beat? Yeah, my words fit in. Respekt on my name |
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| 23 May 2017 10:08 AM |
| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1UjwC4TQcoo |
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La_Flvme
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| 23 May 2017 09:48 PM |
| Even if it did rhyme, which at plenty of times it didn't, rhyming isn't the only component to making good rap. If that was true, Dr. Seuss would be double platinum. ### ### ##### ####### acting like a gangster on roblox who doesn't know the least about making hip hop music. Plz stop breathing dude |
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DoraKillz
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| 23 May 2017 11:45 PM |
^ 1. This was a RESPONSE to a Ro-Set. 2. Why df are you even hating? 3. If you judge by actions, and not lyrics. Then you're not listening to Hip-Hop too much. |
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Shyamos
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| 24 May 2017 05:23 AM |
if ur lyrics were good u could say that but they aren't good |
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La_Flvme
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| 24 May 2017 08:25 AM |
how am I judging off actions and not ur lyrics but the only reason Im even commenting on this thread is because of how awful your lyrics are
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DoraKillz
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| 24 May 2017 09:55 AM |
| ^ lmfao, you clearly got a problem with me. |
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La_Flvme
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| 24 May 2017 06:16 PM |
No I clearly have a problem with your garbage lyrics lol
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atoxical
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DoraKillz
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| 25 May 2017 02:52 AM |
| ^^ You're just hating. You got opinions. You KNOW you ain't gonna be so successful wit the views and stuff. So quit trying to give me L's |
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| 25 May 2017 03:02 AM |
| I have no idea what any of that means but it's a start keep it up |
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Shyamos
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| 25 May 2017 03:46 AM |
| this thread has like ### ###### #### ##### mean nothing anyway its a childrens game forum |
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Shyamos
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| 25 May 2017 03:53 AM |
rwefrw dsf filter views dont matter |
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La_Flvme
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| 25 May 2017 08:19 AM |
"You KNOW you ain't gonna be so successful wit the views and stuff. " 1. not a ro-rapper because I actually have respect for myself 2. if you rap for views and not for lyrical content and quality, you're an even worse person than i thought
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DoraKillz
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| 25 May 2017 08:39 AM |
| ^ Nah, I rap 'cuz I like rapping AND for views. Fact |
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