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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
Joined: 11 Jan 2016
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26 Apr 2017 08:46 AM
I have a game called The Good Old Room [SHOWCASE] and i need a little bit of help on what i should add and make it better.

Some people have said its dull so maybe you can give me some tips on what i can improve.

Read the description of the game before you join.

https://www.roblox.com/games/713589973/The-Good-Old-Room-SHOWCASE


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cbsqueast is online. cbsqueast
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Total Posts: 6784
26 Apr 2017 10:17 AM
-all the walls are wooden planks
like seriously
have you ever seen a house where every wall is made out of wooden planks? accept for REALLLY REALLLY old houses.

-the doors are wooden planks too? ok, no. even old house doors aren't made out of wooden planks

-the point of a fireplace is to heat up the room, but that fireplace is covered by glass .-.
i also don't think fireplaces where that advanced in the 50s

-simply too bland and boring
like
there's not a lot of stuff in the room or anything
and tbh the build itself isn't that high quality

if i would rate it i'd rate it a 4/10
but keep trying you'll get better at building



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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
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27 Apr 2017 09:49 AM
Thanks for your response!



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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
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27 Apr 2017 09:52 AM
When i made the wood plank walls i thought it would be more cozier than just white boring walls but i guess the public didnt like that.


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TheAndrewv is not online. TheAndrewv
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27 Apr 2017 10:06 AM
-all the walls are wooden planks
like seriously
have you ever seen a house where every wall is made out of wooden planks? accept for REALLLY REALLLY old houses.

-the doors are wooden planks too? ok, no. even old house doors aren't made out of wooden planks

-the point of a fireplace is to heat up the room, but that fireplace is covered by glass .-.
i also don't think fireplaces where that advanced in the 50s

-simply too bland and boring
like
there's not a lot of stuff in the room or anything
and tbh the build itself isn't that high quality

but keep trying you'll get better at building [2]


And,

if i would rate it i'd rate it a 1/10
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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
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27 Apr 2017 10:30 AM
I have a fireplace in our house with glass from the 50's, thats what i was inspired from


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TheAndrewv is not online. TheAndrewv
Joined: 24 Jun 2016
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27 Apr 2017 10:44 AM
Sorry but I'm not gonna thumbs down because it will do not help so I better don't do anything.

Also, the game doesn't looks realistic.
Put more details.
Use as many parts and materials as you need.
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koenjo123 is not online. koenjo123
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27 Apr 2017 11:05 AM
Snookie can you teach me how to change or remove the mouse in your screen in game just like that showcase?


henlo
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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
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27 Apr 2017 11:19 AM
oh i know how to!

If you want to remove cursor then make a localscript in StarterGUI and paste in this:

local UserInputService = game:GetService("UserInputService")
UserInputService.MouseIconEnabled = false


If you want to change how the cursor looks thenake a localscript in StarterGUI and paste in this:

local mouse = game.Players.LocalPlayer:GetMouse()
mouse.Icon = 'rbxassetid://Paste texture id you want in here and remove the last number too 1 lower number, so if your id is: 213332 then you should change it to: 213331)



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koenjo123 is not online. koenjo123
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27 Apr 2017 12:01 PM
Thanks alot!


henlo
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SnookieSnacums is not online. SnookieSnacums
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27 Apr 2017 12:08 PM
no problem!


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cbsqueast is online. cbsqueast
Joined: 16 Apr 2011
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27 Apr 2017 06:19 PM
for the walls i think you should look up 50s walls and then remake it in roblox

50s walls were fancy
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TheAndrewv is not online. TheAndrewv
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28 Apr 2017 10:18 AM
Use textures
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MArzalAlBuchariZ is not online. MArzalAlBuchariZ
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28 Apr 2017 10:56 AM
Add more decorations, like posters and stamps on the wall. And maybe more detail.
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itZAKU is online. itZAKU
Joined: 02 Apr 2016
Total Posts: 1247
28 Apr 2017 11:04 AM
no color pallet, no details, no nothing. it looked like u made that in 10 minutes 0.5/10
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