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| 26 Apr 2017 08:46 AM |
I have a game called The Good Old Room [SHOWCASE] and i need a little bit of help on what i should add and make it better.
Some people have said its dull so maybe you can give me some tips on what i can improve.
Read the description of the game before you join.
https://www.roblox.com/games/713589973/The-Good-Old-Room-SHOWCASE
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cbsqueast
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| 26 Apr 2017 10:17 AM |
-all the walls are wooden planks like seriously have you ever seen a house where every wall is made out of wooden planks? accept for REALLLY REALLLY old houses.
-the doors are wooden planks too? ok, no. even old house doors aren't made out of wooden planks
-the point of a fireplace is to heat up the room, but that fireplace is covered by glass .-. i also don't think fireplaces where that advanced in the 50s
-simply too bland and boring like there's not a lot of stuff in the room or anything and tbh the build itself isn't that high quality
if i would rate it i'd rate it a 4/10 but keep trying you'll get better at building
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| 27 Apr 2017 09:52 AM |
When i made the wood plank walls i thought it would be more cozier than just white boring walls but i guess the public didnt like that.
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| 27 Apr 2017 10:06 AM |
-all the walls are wooden planks like seriously have you ever seen a house where every wall is made out of wooden planks? accept for REALLLY REALLLY old houses.
-the doors are wooden planks too? ok, no. even old house doors aren't made out of wooden planks
-the point of a fireplace is to heat up the room, but that fireplace is covered by glass .-. i also don't think fireplaces where that advanced in the 50s
-simply too bland and boring like there's not a lot of stuff in the room or anything and tbh the build itself isn't that high quality
but keep trying you'll get better at building [2]
And, if i would rate it i'd rate it a 1/10 |
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| 27 Apr 2017 10:30 AM |
I have a fireplace in our house with glass from the 50's, thats what i was inspired from
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| 27 Apr 2017 10:44 AM |
Sorry but I'm not gonna thumbs down because it will do not help so I better don't do anything.
Also, the game doesn't looks realistic. Put more details. Use as many parts and materials as you need.
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koenjo123
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| 27 Apr 2017 11:05 AM |
Snookie can you teach me how to change or remove the mouse in your screen in game just like that showcase?
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| 27 Apr 2017 11:19 AM |
oh i know how to!
If you want to remove cursor then make a localscript in StarterGUI and paste in this:
local UserInputService = game:GetService("UserInputService") UserInputService.MouseIconEnabled = false
If you want to change how the cursor looks thenake a localscript in StarterGUI and paste in this:
local mouse = game.Players.LocalPlayer:GetMouse() mouse.Icon = 'rbxassetid://Paste texture id you want in here and remove the last number too 1 lower number, so if your id is: 213332 then you should change it to: 213331)
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cbsqueast
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| 27 Apr 2017 06:19 PM |
for the walls i think you should look up 50s walls and then remake it in roblox
50s walls were fancy |
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| 28 Apr 2017 10:56 AM |
| Add more decorations, like posters and stamps on the wall. And maybe more detail. |
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| 28 Apr 2017 11:04 AM |
| no color pallet, no details, no nothing. it looked like u made that in 10 minutes 0.5/10 |
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