Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:36 AM |
| "Then they noticed something shocking – the sky was blue! It was usually orange where they were from. And white, puffy things slowly moved across it. They had never seen that before. Then they saw something else. A golden ball that was so bright and shiny that it almost blinded you when you looked at it royally sat in the sky like a king on his throne." |
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zarnight
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:38 AM |
| that's kind of interesting |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:39 AM |
Whats the name of the book?
It looks like a good read |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:39 AM |
"that's kind of interesting" Ya gotta admit it. :) |
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Z_illa
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:40 AM |
| My goodness, you guys are flattering! It's not published yet, but it's about these fox-like sisters from another realm who get taken in by the government and taken care of. |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:40 AM |
| Sort of a misadventures book. This is the beginning of the series, though. |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:41 AM |
this sounds pretty good!! very intriguing
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zarnight
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:41 AM |
| so where are you going to put up the entire story? |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:42 AM |
You were probably expecting some troll speech like "0/10 not enough dat boi" Then yes 10000/10 ZOMG BEST STORYZ IN WHOLE OF DANKVERSE |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:43 AM |
"so where are you going to put up the entire story?" It's going to be a real book. |
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coop6578
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:44 AM |
who's gonna publish it tho lol
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:44 AM |
| Your book will start a world revolution that will finally destroy all liberal democrats |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:45 AM |
| You say another realm, how is their sky normally illuminated? |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:45 AM |
"who's gonna publish it tho lol" I'll find an appropriate publisher. |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:46 AM |
| Add Altair and Dante and Red and Mario |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:47 AM |
"You say another realm, how is their sky normally illuminated?" The sky in that realm is just the atmosphere illuminated by hundreds of tiny, orange stars. |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:47 AM |
"Cool. What's it called?" I have no idea yet. |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:48 AM |
| So wait, the protagonists live in a rogue planet and yet they do not freeze? How? |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:50 AM |
"So wait, the [ Content Hashtagged ] live in a rogue planet and yet they do not freeze? How?" There is plenty of heat below the ground given by a hot liquid (not lava). That, and the millions of tiny, orange stars heat up the atmosphere. |
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:53 AM |
| An interesting setup. Lemme give you a tip - don't spend too much time on earth, I'm sure the reader would have more fun in this new realm of yours. Of course, you can write however you want though. |
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Fireoria
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| 18 Apr 2017 11:53 AM |
| Or maybe it is lava...? *cue ominous violin music* |
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