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| 05 Apr 2017 10:06 PM |
When you're gonna die You know there's no afterlife Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry Then you release a sigh Meet your God eye to eye Then you ask "Oh why" Cause your faith is a lie (x2)
Breakin through this cell On my way to hell You can already tell That my life is a fail Every time I'm look back My whole life is whack No body had my back My faith is what I lacked Seeing people dyin My own mama be cryin The people be fightin The noose be tightin No body helped each other They don't bother Your enemies same as brothers
You're alive and you wonder why Out of everyone else you are 'that guy' Maybe your life is a coma Maybe you are dreaming Except its real and it is happening
When you're gonna die You know there's no afterlife Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry Then you release a sigh Meet your God eye to eye Then you ask "Oh why" Cause your faith is a lie (x2)
Gun to my head I'm already dead If they pull the trigger Then whats said is said Messin with the wrong gang They're quite insane Couldn't hear what they sang Cause they're high off cochaine I'm not prayin I'm just sayin That the story I'm layin Is my life just endin I close my eyes I'm ready to die Smoke from the gun Now the ground's my behd
No body will find you Consider you useless They don't bother Another gang child
My life is whack! (x4) Life is not a game Messin with the wrong gang Got me not with my mom But with a bullet in my brain My life is whack! (x2)
When you're gonna die You know there's no afterlife Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry Then you release a sigh Meet your God eye to eye Then you ask "Oh why" Cause your faith is a lie (x2) |
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captc
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| 05 Apr 2017 11:10 PM |
10/10 would rap again
is great |
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| 06 Apr 2017 01:50 AM |
| Jesus it couldn't be edgier if it was a god damn combat knife. |
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Verkauf
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| 06 Apr 2017 04:52 AM |
Surprisingly good, needs to be cut down a bit and you're trying too hard. Let it flow and not everything needs to rhyme.
- When night falls, she cloaks the world in impenetrable darkness. |
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| 06 Apr 2017 06:56 AM |
Duh it was suppose to be edgy 😜 But frfr I wanted to try to make a nonfunny song and this is the turn out Remember I use to say i cant make a serious to save my life 😏 |
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| 06 Apr 2017 07:00 AM |
The song is about a young man, who is questioning the existence of a God, resulting to gang activity in order to fit in to the hood he is in, but when he messes with the wrong gang, they give him the ultimate price, the death sentence, though he doesn't care cause at the end he sees himself as human trash.
The song will be posted next post: |
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| 06 Apr 2017 07:01 AM |
| https://youtu.be/e9bPSdwKeHo |
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| 06 Apr 2017 04:36 PM |
Ok
I'm just go back to being the amazing music god I am and stop taking music seriously 😐 |
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Loyal2One
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| 06 Apr 2017 04:55 PM |
na dude you have some potential when i first writing serious songs i was as cringe as a ro rap from a first time poster |
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Loyal2One
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| 06 Apr 2017 04:56 PM |
| and congrats on 1666 posts!!1! |
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| 06 Apr 2017 05:09 PM |
| hey can you speak up a bit, i can't hear you |
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| 06 Apr 2017 06:33 PM |
"hey can you speak up a bit, i can't hear you"
My parents were home :P |
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