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Re: Can you guys rate my lyrics?

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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
Joined: 13 Sep 2015
Total Posts: 2567
05 Apr 2017 10:06 PM
When you're gonna die
You know there's no afterlife
Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry
Then you release a sigh
Meet your God eye to eye
Then you ask "Oh why"
Cause your faith is a lie (x2)

Breakin through this cell
On my way to hell
You can already tell
That my life is a fail
Every time I'm look back
My whole life is whack
No body had my back
My faith is what I lacked
Seeing people dyin
My own mama be cryin
The people be fightin
The noose be tightin
No body helped each other
They don't bother
Your enemies same as brothers

You're alive and you wonder why
Out of everyone else you are 'that guy'
Maybe your life is a coma
Maybe you are dreaming
Except its real and it is happening

When you're gonna die
You know there's no afterlife
Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry
Then you release a sigh
Meet your God eye to eye
Then you ask "Oh why"
Cause your faith is a lie (x2)

Gun to my head
I'm already dead
If they pull the trigger
Then whats said is said
Messin with the wrong gang
They're quite insane
Couldn't hear what they sang
Cause they're high off cochaine
I'm not prayin
I'm just sayin
That the story I'm layin
Is my life just endin
I close my eyes
I'm ready to die
Smoke from the gun
Now the ground's my behd

No body will find you
Consider you useless
They don't bother
Another gang child

My life is whack! (x4)
Life is not a game
Messin with the wrong gang
Got me not with my mom
But with a bullet in my brain
My life is whack! (x2)

When you're gonna die
You know there's no afterlife
Getting on your knees cause you are about to cry
Then you release a sigh
Meet your God eye to eye
Then you ask "Oh why"
Cause your faith is a lie (x2)
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captc is not online. captc
Joined: 12 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 8688
05 Apr 2017 11:10 PM
10/10 would rap again


is great
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mastergyroosandwich is not online. mastergyroosandwich
Joined: 28 Sep 2012
Total Posts: 4085
06 Apr 2017 01:50 AM
Jesus it couldn't be edgier if it was a god damn combat knife.
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Verkauf is not online. Verkauf
Joined: 22 May 2009
Total Posts: 12965
06 Apr 2017 04:52 AM
Surprisingly good, needs to be cut down a bit and you're trying too hard. Let it flow and not everything needs to rhyme.


- When night falls, she cloaks the world in impenetrable darkness.
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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
Joined: 13 Sep 2015
Total Posts: 2567
06 Apr 2017 06:56 AM
Duh it was suppose to be edgy 😜
But frfr I wanted to try to make a nonfunny song and this is the turn out
Remember I use to say i cant make a serious to save my life 😏
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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
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Total Posts: 2567
06 Apr 2017 07:00 AM
The song is about a young man, who is questioning the existence of a God, resulting to gang activity in order to fit in to the hood he is in, but when he messes with the wrong gang, they give him the ultimate price, the death sentence, though he doesn't care cause at the end he sees himself as human trash.

The song will be posted next post:
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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
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06 Apr 2017 07:01 AM
https://youtu.be/e9bPSdwKeHo
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
Joined: 24 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 10155
06 Apr 2017 03:30 PM
i think ya did ok
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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
Joined: 13 Sep 2015
Total Posts: 2567
06 Apr 2017 04:36 PM
Ok

I'm just go back to being the amazing music god I am and stop taking music seriously 😐
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
Joined: 24 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 10155
06 Apr 2017 04:55 PM
na dude you have some potential
when i first writing serious songs i was as cringe as a ro rap from a first time poster
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
Joined: 24 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 10155
06 Apr 2017 04:56 PM
and congrats on 1666 posts!!1!
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
Joined: 17 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 4087
06 Apr 2017 05:09 PM
hey can you speak up a bit, i can't hear you
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Kimdracula is not online. Kimdracula
Joined: 13 Sep 2015
Total Posts: 2567
06 Apr 2017 06:33 PM
"hey can you speak up a bit, i can't hear you"

My parents were home :P
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Anopisthograph is not online. Anopisthograph
Joined: 05 Aug 2016
Total Posts: 889
06 Apr 2017 06:57 PM
14/10
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synfull is not online. synfull
Joined: 22 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 355
06 Apr 2017 07:02 PM
oh god that's long


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