Clianni
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| 03 Apr 2017 03:24 PM |
I see all the basic raps im telling you they boring Could even read the whole thing cause i was snoring I know my bars aren't the absolute best Atleast when i spit, my bars aint a mess And atleast when i rap my bars make sense These bars that i just spit was to get the bar rolling I write my own raps so to all you hater's they are stolen This is just the beginning and definitely not the end All enemies in this rap game never any friends The basic rappers rhyme 'shame', 'name', and 'fame'. If that's what you do then the title 'rapper' is definitely not something you should claim. |
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| 03 Apr 2017 03:31 PM |
| Quite good bars, Just gotta work on multi's |
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Clianni
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| 03 Apr 2017 03:37 PM |
Multisyllable rhymes.
So instead of saying: "I'm a great rapper cause I spit facts They call me Usain cause I run tracks"
Say: I'm a great rapper, Facts, I run tracks All these rappers wack, They got no comebacks"
So instead of "Facts/tracks" being the only rhymes in the two bars, You got "Facts/Tracks/Wack/Comebacks" as the rhymes in the two bars. It makes it more lyrical and adds more too reading it. |
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| 03 Apr 2017 03:38 PM |
| thats called internal rhyme |
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| 03 Apr 2017 03:38 PM |
| but thanks for clearing that up |
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Loyal2One
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| 03 Apr 2017 04:50 PM |
| but internal rhyme is where you have a word midline rhyme with the end of the line of middle of the next |
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Loyal2One
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| 03 Apr 2017 04:50 PM |
| wait nvm i thought we were still talking about syllables |
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Loyal2One
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| 03 Apr 2017 04:51 PM |
| good job pale u r smart er athen #### me####### owo!!############################################### i love #### ### Pale##### |
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