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Re: Just a lil rap

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Clianni is not online. Clianni
Joined: 09 Aug 2013
Total Posts: 19
03 Apr 2017 03:24 PM
I see all the basic raps im telling you they boring
Could even read the whole thing cause i was snoring
I know my bars aren't the absolute best
Atleast when i spit, my bars aint a mess
And atleast when i rap my bars make sense
These bars that i just spit was to get the bar rolling
I write my own raps so to all you hater's they are stolen
This is just the beginning and definitely not the end
All enemies in this rap game never any friends
The basic rappers rhyme 'shame', 'name', and 'fame'.
If that's what you do then the title 'rapper' is definitely not something you should claim.
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iEmmanuelEmenike is not online. iEmmanuelEmenike
Joined: 31 Oct 2014
Total Posts: 304
03 Apr 2017 03:31 PM
Quite good bars, Just gotta work on multi's
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Clianni is not online. Clianni
Joined: 09 Aug 2013
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03 Apr 2017 03:33 PM
Thx for the advice :)
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PaleFolklore is not online. PaleFolklore
Joined: 30 Jul 2010
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03 Apr 2017 03:33 PM
what is a multi
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iEmmanuelEmenike is not online. iEmmanuelEmenike
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03 Apr 2017 03:37 PM
Multisyllable rhymes.

So instead of saying:
"I'm a great rapper cause I spit facts
They call me Usain cause I run tracks"

Say:
I'm a great rapper, Facts, I run tracks
All these rappers wack, They got no comebacks"

So instead of "Facts/tracks" being the only rhymes in the two bars,
You got "Facts/Tracks/Wack/Comebacks" as the rhymes in the two bars.
It makes it more lyrical and adds more too reading it.
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PaleFolklore is not online. PaleFolklore
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03 Apr 2017 03:38 PM
thats called internal rhyme
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PaleFolklore is not online. PaleFolklore
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03 Apr 2017 03:38 PM
but thanks for clearing that up
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
Joined: 24 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 10155
03 Apr 2017 04:50 PM
but internal rhyme is where you have a word midline rhyme with the end of the line of middle of the next
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
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03 Apr 2017 04:50 PM
wait nvm i thought we were still talking about syllables
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Loyal2One is not online. Loyal2One
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03 Apr 2017 04:51 PM
good job pale u r smart er athen #### me####### owo!!############################################### i love #### ### Pale#####
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