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| 27 Mar 2017 03:00 PM |
This is part IV in a series of stories created by my friend JAY and me. How it works, is a person will create a post. The next person will continue the story, based on the post above them, and so on.
RULES: I. No "meanwhile." II. No making everybody in the scene die. III. BE APPROPRIATE.
CHAPTERS: This is a new feature being added. Chapters can only be declared by me or JAY, and divide the story into parts. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 03:03 PM |
Continue from here.
CHAPTER I- The Fall of the Ko-Re-Seer There was an empire called the Ko-re-seer empire. It was over thrown by another kingdom. The leaders of the empire, named Donald, Boss, Ch-ar, and Ethan, boarded a helicopter and went to a place called the field of memories. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 05:03 PM |
The feild is full of flowers and bushes. It's a pretty sight. Boss looked at a flower, he was about to pick it till it came alive.
(I'll do tasks still)
New Task: Defeat the Flower To Do So: Find a way to kill the flower.
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| 27 Mar 2017 05:31 PM |
| Boss, we are trying to make this story a little less violent, so tasks may not be needed as much. The flower was friendly! Her name was Maria she gave the former emperors a place to stay, in the field of memories. The field of memories had a magical effect. It caused the people in it to reflect on their past. Donald remembered when he beat Ronald McDonald in a fight, and his sky palace. He remembered his friend's son, this kid named Fin. Ethan remembered his journey to the crossroads, and when he fell into oil. Ch-ar remembered being a prisoner of the aliens, and Boss remembered defeating Kim Orange. The emperors stayed there until- |
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| 27 Mar 2017 05:50 PM |
| A violent protest robot attacked, Why do protest robots keep spawning? Ronald asked, Then Kim Orange make the protest robots into a high tec- |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:00 PM |
| battle machine that had 3 weapons, in which where water guns and then- |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:02 PM |
^ As I said, please limit violence.
Tech failure machines. Kim Orange had returned from space. Then, the robot grabbed Kim, and flew him off to space again. Next, Maria the flower treated the ex-emperors to dinner. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:03 PM |
| Then the machines turned on Kim before he could do anything. They flew Kim off to space again. Then, Maria the flower made pot pie for the immortals. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:08 PM |
I quit since this is just peace stretched out. So...
THE END
Goodnight, little me. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:13 PM |
| ^ Boss, here's the truth. The last version got deleted because it was too inappropriate. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:13 PM |
| You can add some violence, but not too much please. I don't want it deleted again! |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:15 PM |
| That's literally the only reason I'm trying to make it follow the ROBLOX rules more. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:16 PM |
| Then, they realized the pie was poisonous! They turned on Maria. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:34 PM |
| Also, you don't need violence and fights to make a story. In Let's Make a Random Endless Story I, there was no fights, just being wacky. |
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| 27 Mar 2017 06:51 PM |
| Can you let's tHis horrible excuse for an excuse |
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| 28 Mar 2017 01:51 AM |
| Then Donald and char made the helicopter into A ROFLcopter that's run out of memes not oil |
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| 28 Mar 2017 06:06 AM |
The meme chopper flew away with Donald, Ch-ar, Ethan, and Boss to-
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| 28 Mar 2017 06:33 AM |
they became doctors there.
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| 28 Mar 2017 06:36 AM |
| But oro and peek tried to make the hospital the guest 1337 hospital, Char tried to stop them but- |
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| 28 Mar 2017 07:42 AM |
Then an overseer was walking slowly, with damaged armour saying (deleted) on it. Was this the last remaining ko-re-seer member? |
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| 28 Mar 2017 07:52 AM |
I got an epic plan...
Meanwhile...
Boss was stabbing a dragon, it was being sliced to peices. Blood dripped everywhere. Then a staff burned everyone in the world besides Char and Boss.
THE END. |
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| 28 Mar 2017 07:55 AM |
| Boss it's only acceptable if your signature is "the end" |
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| 28 Mar 2017 08:02 AM |
Oh I forgot my signature.
Well...
THE END
and, my signature is...
Goodnight, little me.
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| 28 Mar 2017 08:33 AM |
| OMG PINK SHEEP FANBOY / DONALD TRUMP GUY IS BACK FOR EVEN MORE CRINGE! |
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