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missmassdestruction is not online. missmassdestruction
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23 Mar 2017 08:14 PM
Write about your favorite video game, and if you don't have one write about why.
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scatteredmemories is not online. scatteredmemories
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23 Mar 2017 08:15 PM
i dont play vidya games bc im not a loser


hey :))
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missmassdestruction is not online. missmassdestruction
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23 Mar 2017 08:17 PM
@scattered

F-. Bad grammar, bad spelling ("vidya"), and bad explanation. Only one sentence.
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WashedPotatoes is online. WashedPotatoes
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23 Mar 2017 08:18 PM
my favourite video game is minecraft because you hit things with your hands its really entertaining
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JorDandere is not online. JorDandere
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23 Mar 2017 08:18 PM
I will grade your hairline--F.
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UnrealizedPotential is not online. UnrealizedPotential
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23 Mar 2017 08:20 PM
If I had to describe my favorite game, I'd probably say Fallout: New Vegas. With its quality atmosphere, story, music, companions, and weaponry, it sits high on my list of favorite video games. In addition, the modding tools that the developer provided allow for easy modification of the game, something that I believe every game should allow for.
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missmassdestruction is not online. missmassdestruction
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23 Mar 2017 08:21 PM
@washed

F+. I enjoy that you did an understandable explanation BUT there was only one sentence and the grammar was bad.
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missmassdestruction is not online. missmassdestruction
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23 Mar 2017 08:21 PM
@jor


#### you
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Aetricity is not online. Aetricity
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23 Mar 2017 08:23 PM
I have no favorite video game. The thought of playing a game for longer than 20 minutes to me is unappealing because I like diverting my attention a lot rather than focusing on one thing. Furthermore, I can't really find any games that I like as much as I try to look for them.
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missmassdestruction is not online. missmassdestruction
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23 Mar 2017 08:23 PM
@Un

B. Good and a lot more than a sentence. I enjoy the good grammar and spelling,and I can understand why you like the game. However, it's still very short and you didn't end it very well. Also, good detailing.
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JorDandere is not online. JorDandere
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23 Mar 2017 08:25 PM
hairline bout as straight as a staircase. hairline bout as consistent as my overused headphone wires. neck bout as long as a football punt my boy. nose bout as big as a sixteen wheeler with an extension hitch.
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Printway is not online. Printway
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23 Mar 2017 08:26 PM
My favorite video game is Battlefield 1, it was released on October 21, 2016.


Did you hear about the guy whose whole left side was cut off? He's all right now.
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harleybog6 is not online. harleybog6
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23 Mar 2017 08:26 PM
My favorite video game currently is Huniepop. The game is a mix of Bejeweled and an anime dating simulator. I enjoy the gameplay as it gets addicting the more you play. It gets really pleasurable when you finish 5 dates including 1 night date with a single girl. There is a total of 12 girls in Huniepop all with their unique dialogues, costumes, and pictures. My favorite girl in the game is Audrey Belrose. I have played it for 30 hours and unlocked 17 out of 20 achievements on time I wrote this.

Another video game I also like is Blizzard's Overwatch. It's Blizzard's first original title in over years. It has a great story behind all the characters and the gameplay is enjoyable. You can play Overwatch casually or competitively. Overwatch also has some nice women. My personal favorite is D.va and/or Mercy.


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Gregtracy35094 is not online. Gregtracy35094
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23 Mar 2017 08:27 PM
I like Gran Turismo 4 because it has cars in it.
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CreeperReport is not online. CreeperReport
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23 Mar 2017 08:27 PM
i like it


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Nathan572 is not online. Nathan572
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23 Mar 2017 08:27 PM
i liek roblox :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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PoptartNoahh is not online. PoptartNoahh
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23 Mar 2017 08:28 PM
Ostensibly, only ostriches or oysters ordained Oreos on Odin's omnipotence. Therefore, the third thing that thought that they tinkered thought too tall.
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WaffleInvasion is not online. WaffleInvasion
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23 Mar 2017 08:28 PM
Roblox is my favorite game.Yes,you probably think I'm insane but let me tell you something.I don't have a lot of games.So here is the reason why. Roblox is an open sandbox where you can build whatever,play whatever and be whatever you want. Of course,there are some limits like the dirty games but besides that,Roblox is a good game.
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Prince_Blueblood is not online. Prince_Blueblood
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23 Mar 2017 08:28 PM
I don't feel like writing.


https://www.roblox.com/library/707334547/Sup
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zingfiredragon2 is not online. zingfiredragon2
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23 Mar 2017 08:29 PM
I definitely have a favorite videogame - Rise of the Tomb Raider. All the aspects of the game helped put it into that position. From the beautiful graphics, to the tactical or rambo-esque combat, it is one a kind.
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ilikeblocks is not online. ilikeblocks
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23 Mar 2017 08:29 PM
No comment.
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theodore2006 is online. theodore2006
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23 Mar 2017 08:33 PM
My favorite video game is Battlefield 1. Battlefield 1 is a game based off world war 1. It has war stories, or in other words: you playing as someone that survived something big. From jumping off a blimp about to explode, to even having artillary fired at your tank! Some reasons I like the game Battlefield 1 (b1) is because, the graphics. Oh and not mention, it's realistic. You can actually barge through a door...while in Cod you can't even open one. Lastly, the game can actually teach you about ww1. Like the Mark V tank, and so on. And so to conclude this, the game Battlefield 1, is a truly amazing game.
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CorporateShill is not online. CorporateShill
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23 Mar 2017 08:42 PM
"My favorite video game is Battlefield 1. Battlefield 1 is a game based off world war 1. It has war stories, or in other words: you playing as someone that survived something big. From jumping off a blimp about to explode, to even having artillary fired at your tank! Some reasons I like the game Battlefield 1 (b1) is because, the graphics. Oh and not mention, it's realistic. You can actually barge through a door...while in Cod you can't even open one. Lastly, the game can actually teach you about ww1. Like the Mark V tank, and so on. And so to conclude this, the game Battlefield 1, is a truly amazing game."

-"World War I" should be capitalized, it is a proper noun.
-"you playing as someone that survived something big"-Awkward sentence structure.
-Spelling error, it should be "Artillery"
-"Some reasons I like the game Battlefield 1 (b1) is because" -Incorrectly formed sentence, does not make grammatical sense
-"Oh and not mention" -Structure error, missing word.
-"COD" should be capitalized completely as it is an acronym
-"WWI" should be capitalized completely as it is an acronym
-"And so to.." - Do not start your sentence with a preposition.
-"Like the Mark V tank.." - Do not start your sentence with a preposition.
-"..this, the game Battlefield 1..." - Redundancy
-"Some reasons I like the game Battlefield is because, the graphics" - Multiple reasons are not listed in this sentence and do not match up with the plural tense. There is also an unnecessary comma after "because".
-"You can actually barge through a door...while in Cod" - Unnecessary ellipsis.
-Not enough detailed support for your argument
-The paragraph could be improved with a greater variety in sentence length.
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SN0IPE is not online. SN0IPE
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23 Mar 2017 08:45 PM
My favorite game is Roblox because you can do whatever you want to do and whenever you want to do
It's the land of creativity where you can dress however and not be told why or how
You can make your own clothes to customize your character unlike some games
But instead of describing it I will sing you a song

All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places, worn out faces
Bright and early for their daily races
Going nowhere, going nowhere
Their tears are filling up their glasses
No expression, no expression
Hide my head I want to drown my sorrow
No tomorrow, no tomorrow
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theodore2006 is online. theodore2006
Joined: 25 Jun 2013
Total Posts: 3534
23 Mar 2017 08:45 PM
:( my god







I feel so bad at writing now:(
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