Kramer777
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| 07 Feb 2017 08:02 PM |
https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=209265468 This is all of chapter one.
Keep in mind that I wrote this when I was eight.
This is the bread over there is the evil toaster. My story starts with how the bread meant the toaster. One morning a human pick up one of the bread and then put it in the evil toaster. Then soon the bread was toast! Then the evil human ate the toast! ahhhh said the bread. The other bread ran away. Our main Character is named whatever your name is if you are reading this. And his friends are named Bob Steve Joe Bobby Jacob Jake Sean x(Joey) & x)John) the leader of the bread force. They have a computer. The name of the computer is combreadputer. John is on a mission too destroy the toasters but there is more then one. There are hundreds of toasters & hundreds of humans. First John went (to) (a) toaster then he bit the toaster & then he pulled the toasters plug. One toaster down hundreds to go said John. So then John went back to the loaf then said the pass code bread rocks! & then it opened up to a secret HQ then he said too Bob get every one! We need to destroy the toasters! Ok said Bob. You are near a toaster. And a human is near he/she almost pick you up then Sean appeared and kicked you away from the toaster then you said who are you. Then Sean said I am Sean member of the bread force. And then he bit the toaster & swung his rope around the toaster and pulled it out. And the toaster got slammed against the ground & broke into pieces. Sean said too you go with me to the HQ. Then John said to you. You can be part of the bread force if you prove too me by bringing me a toaster. Ok said you then you went out of the HQ and saw a toaster [and John gave you a toaster killer gun] and then you used your toaster killer gun then you shot it aging on the plug the toaster is down. You brought it to HQ & John saw it. John said you are now part of the bread force. Then something was making a rumbling noise. It was the toaster! [Not just a toaster the leader toaster] then the bread force came up & John bit the toaster. Then the toaster threw John on the floor. And then Sean put his rope around the toaster then the toaster threw the rope around him. Then Sean let go and fell down to the floor and john did too. Bob said too you use your toaster killer gun now! Ok said you. Then you used it on the toaster. Nothing happen to the toaster then the toaster came up to you and took the gun and then absorbed it and shot you.[You have a hole in you now] Then the rest of the bread force ran away. Then John and Sean came up and quickly bring you too the bread baker & then you got fixed! and then you went too this training thing and the bread force was there then you got armor and a jetpack two toaster killer guns and some grenades and two swords and a shield then the bread force went up the elevator. You said hey what about me! John said you are going to fight. and then they lifted up the wall and the toaster came out [# fake toaster made by the bread works that is huge and looks like the leader the leader looks like a monster so now you know how the leader toaster looks like and this looks like a monster to] so then you threw a grenades the toaster shot it back to you. Then you dodged it then you used the toaster killer guns. The toaster used his lasers on you. [So now you have small holes in you] then you used the swords. Then you flew up [with your jetpack] and threw grenades at the toaster and your swords then a huge explosion happen then the toaster exploded![the fake leader toaster is not even close to the real leader toaster] then the bread force came down the elevator John said to you here have these[they are these thing that help you to repair yourself] then you got fix again. then you went outside to find a toaster to destroy then you saw a human [the breads first fight against a human] then the human pick you up then you used your killer toaster guns [that are set on water mode]then you spread it. Then you drop then you said go away and drop the other bread! [The human was holding more than one] then the human drop the bread and fainted [because of the bread talking and the human was so surprised that the human got Knock out] Yes! Said you. Then a toaster came to you and tried to attack you but you used your toaster killer gun [without looking at it because you shot it from behind your back] then twenty toasters were behind you then they took your guns and absorb them then combined. Then they shot disk at you. You fell down to the ground. |
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ianuk
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| 07 Feb 2017 08:04 PM |
im doing a dramatic reading of this tomorrow when i'm home alone
ahhhh said the bread. |
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Kramer777
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Kramer777
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Kramer777
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| 07 Feb 2017 08:16 PM |
I don't think I'd be able to write something like this ever again
Maybe one day I'll do a reboot. |
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Kramer777
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Kramer777
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| 08 Feb 2017 02:04 PM |
| Chapter two'll be posted today |
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Kramer777
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| 19 Feb 2017 05:49 PM |
ahhhh said the bread
"Helmets are just masks that cover your whole head." |
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Kramer777
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| 22 Mar 2017 08:15 PM |
| I never uploaded the next chapter .. |
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Drcooldog
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| 22 Mar 2017 08:17 PM |
| I thought I posted in this thread or was it another one? |
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Kramer777
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| 22 Mar 2017 08:24 PM |
| I'll post chapter two soon |
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Kramer777
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| 22 Mar 2017 08:49 PM |
| One more bump until chapter 2 |
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| 22 Mar 2017 08:54 PM |
| Hey, thanks for bumping I changed my username and lost this. I'm AncientNoob, I mean AncientBoots. |
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Kramer777
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| 22 Mar 2017 09:44 PM |
| Chapter two will be posted tomorrow |
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Kramer777
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