shoty3
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| 10 Mar 2017 11:26 AM |
~Part 1 A girl named Belle was in a hotel celebrating her birthday tomorrow. She had recently talked with her friend to take the whole class to go camping, they had everything set up, even the campfires ready for using. Bu later that night, she discovered something she can't comprehend, something she will remember for the rest of her life. She was getting ready for bed, so she would be able to stay awake tomorrow having the time of her life. At about 2 PM she heard her friend scream.
~Part 2 She went into the room to see if she was alright, all she saw were the words: "You will see her again. But how?" She didn't know what to think. She looked to see where her friend had gone, but all she found was a busted open window and blood on the frames. Taking that she was in danger, she still went. All of the class was preparing for the trip. She was still a bit paranoid, as no reports had shown up for her friend being found. Some students were paranoid too.
~Part 3 The class had taken their stuff off the bus and set it up in their tents, there had been about 6 kids per tent. They had taken hiking trips and played games all day long. Now it was time for bed, or at least, time to be the most terrified she had been in her life. She had made her beding just right, and some of her friend were in the tent with her. She couldn't sleep at all, still thinking about her friend and how she got taken away. Later the whole class woke up to the bus exploding, the gas tank ripped open and a torch tossed in it.
~Part 4 Finally about to sleep, she heard a rustle in the trees, as if a monkey had stayed up late to search around. She peaked out to see what made the noise, but found nothing. Thinking it was probably nothing, she slept once more. 2 hours later that night, seven kids were missing, though no one had heard them call for help..At this point she couldn't sleep at all, there was something hunting them. picking them off ONE. BY. ONE. She grabbed a flashlight, and went out.
~Part 5 She had traveled about 19 meters, when she heard a muffled call for help, when she found the source, it was her friend Ange with half her body ripped off. Feeling a wave of nausea, she continued on. Her friend was far from being saved now. God knows what happened to the rest. She returned to camp finding that the teacher was gone, only two kids there. One with scratches on his back, the other with a gash on her cheek. "What had happened to all of them?"
~Part 6 She talked with the two kids for a while, they knew nothing about the missing of most of the class. They had been sleeping. Though she still wanted answers, she fixed the two up with some meds she packed, and they headed on. Later they found a radio tower, but nobody there. Just a body that had the name "Ms. Phritz" on it. She had attempted to run from whatever was out there to escape, and fell off. She found later, a cave. She wanted answers so badly. So she ventured on.
~Part 7 "The Last Breath." She lost her two friends in the cave. It was to dark to see anything. When she found a light of some sort, it turned out to be a rusted torch, skulls on the floor, bones on the walls.. And bits and pieces of ripped clothing. She couldn't believe what she saw. Her friend that she lost, her backpack in ruins. Her body. She felt something scratch her arm, then her hips, then whole body. She was stabbed later...and felt herself fade away. She saw her friend again..she felt the most happy in her life, as if the misery was over. She wasn't on Earth anymore..
The Rake.
-Shoty3 (Comments on my story can be PM'ed to me, just follow me.This was a little contest the group owner held, Agen_tt) |
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