Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:21 PM |
Paying 30 funds from my group and if u have a shirt ill buy for 160 robux!
My English teacher has asked me to include the following in this paragraph
Paragraphs rhetorical questions one word
Short sentences ellipsis connectives
Adverbs similes simple sentences
Adjectives onomatopoeia
Verbs power sentences
Magic Sentences alliteration
Metaphors speech marks
Personification semi colons
Rule of three (triplets) compound sentences
Complex Sentences if,if if
Should be quite basic for some of you older people out there, I will be awarding anyone Who makes the best paragraph/story out of this. 163 robux and a 800 rap gear"
Here's what we were asked to do in under 3 mins;
The sun was shining. Sweat dripped from everyone's faces. The palm trees stood as still as the Queen's guards. Children Ran across the layer of the sea. The sand was very soft, but very hot. Caps of beer bot#### lay on the ground.
Please improve this small paragraph, it can be extended up to 3 paragraphs and you can add more stuff to it if it helps you include as much of the techniques as possible, Thanks!
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:23 PM |
pleaseee
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:23 PM |
brbrbrb
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:24 PM |
rtyui
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:25 PM |
ok it might take a few minutes
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:26 PM |
thank you!
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:31 PM |
.bvj
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:33 PM |
On the vibrant and beautiful day the sun was shining, and turning skin to a light red hue, as sweat dripped off of their tired faces. The near palm trees were standing still, like they had an obligation not to move, like the Queen's guards. As the day passed the sound of children having fun on soft beach sand stood out, it was deliberately entering the ears of the attentive passerbys.
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:33 PM |
ok that was the first few sentences
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:35 PM |
Yo man that's amazing! you basically leveled me up 1+ on my meg!
Friend me, join amartax and link me to a shirt costing 163 robux
ILL send u a 800 rap limited meanwhile
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:35 PM |
| The sun was glistening. Sweat streamed from everyone's faces. The palm trees stood as still as the Queen's guards. Children rushed across the layer of the sea. The sand was very soft, and fine, but as said the sun caused the sand to be burning. Caps of #### bottles lay on the ground. I was viewing from my balcony, the seaside breeze brushing my face. However, this couldn't be my day full of worries nor the day full of freedom. |
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:36 PM |
And turn your trades on, and if possible, post a few more paragraphs. (You dont have to)
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:37 PM |
lily u also join my primary group ill pay out once i have something!
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:37 PM |
infact anyone who tries join myprimary ill payout when possible
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Qudiz
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:39 PM |
sent! im going to sleep right now, ill trach this and pay out more asap tomorrow
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:40 PM |
i'll trade later I want to keep that
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vijyn
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:49 PM |
| The sun was shining. Sweat dripped from everyone's faces. The palm trees stood as still as the Queen's guards. Children ran across the layer of the sea. The sand was very soft and smooth, yet the sun making it blistering hot. Caps of old #### bottles lay on the ground. I stood near a man sipping his drink. We stood in the shade of a umbrella. My luck today had been less than unfortunate. I tried to be cheerful with my weak smile but it was obvious I didn't mean it. My white t-shirt was stained with sweat and depression. I stood as the leaves on the palm trees, watching the ocean waves disappear and reappear. acts: vijyn :* 💕 (03/05/17) |
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vijyn
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:49 PM |
(my signature was Not supposed to be in there!)
acts: vijyn :* 💕 (03/05/17) |
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vijyn
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| 07 Mar 2017 03:51 PM |
*I stood as still as the leaves on the palm trees
acts: vijyn :* 💕 (03/05/17) |
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