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| 05 Mar 2017 09:47 PM |
First week: Braces, braces, I hate braces They ruin everybody's faces Braces, braces, I hate braces I don't wanna talk in public places Braces, braces, I hate braces, I want to destroy them, leaving no traces Braces, braces, I hate braces I better prepare, tie up my shoe laces I have to wear these things for two years? This makes me think that the end is newr I have to wear these things for two years? They made of the same material as gears! I have to wear these things for two years? This makes me want to shoot a deer I have to wear these things for two years? How am I going to talk to my peers? I can't eat food, Talk to my dudes Why do these make life so crude? When people talk to me and I don't respond, they think I'm rude! These things really put me in a bad mood They give me a bad attitude Braces, braces, I hate braces, They ruin everybody's faces Braces, braces, I hate them I hate them more then Eminem hates Kim
Second week(so far) Hey, these things really aren't so bad The fact that they straighten teeth makes me glad But I can eat sugary gum, that makes me sad All those good times with fruit snacks I had This will be over soon, like a fad But I can't take them off ever, that makes me mad |
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| 05 Mar 2017 09:49 PM |
I hate them more THAN and The end is NEAR |
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| 05 Mar 2017 09:54 PM |
My braces are pink, I have the power chain ones.
Crap, I forgot how to breathe. |
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Axiw
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| 05 Mar 2017 09:54 PM |
| I like your mini poetry slam |
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| 05 Mar 2017 10:00 PM |
Someone has to give me credit for the last two lines of the first week one, "Braces, braces, I hate them! I hate them more than Eminem hates Kim!" |
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| 05 Mar 2017 10:03 PM |
this is so cringeworthy oh my god
~Jmanfh, add 45,872 posts |
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| 05 Mar 2017 10:04 PM |
| says the guy who never does any constructive criticism |
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| 05 Mar 2017 10:17 PM |
| peeps still need to see these hot beats |
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| 06 Mar 2017 07:20 AM |
| my nightposts never get much attention |
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| 06 Mar 2017 07:50 AM |
lol nice poem i got rid of my braces this summer :d |
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| 06 Mar 2017 08:05 AM |
| But I CAN'T eat sugary gum i s # # u l d # # # # # # # # o o f - r e a d m y p o s t s . |
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| 09 Mar 2017 05:11 PM |
| I wanna write some piano music to the first week poem |
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