RoScripts
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| 04 Feb 2017 04:26 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W1M9KH5wUA4
My body is ready. |
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| 04 Feb 2017 04:53 PM |
RoScripts make a part 3
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RoScripts
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| Joined: 27 Oct 2012 |
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| 04 Feb 2017 08:46 PM |
| Next video is gonna be about ATR |
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Voidtexx
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| Joined: 25 May 2011 |
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| 04 Feb 2017 08:49 PM |
vcr
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZcYuv-Dv3Hk&t=0s |
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| 04 Feb 2017 10:58 PM |
VCR wasn't accurate at all to be exact To really portray it, it's full of people asking for "constructive criticism". Yet when they receive any negative comments on the video they've created, they instantly go on a rampage.
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PhireFox
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PhireFox
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| Joined: 31 May 2012 |
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| 04 Feb 2017 11:58 PM |
Meh, dunno if you wanted feedback or not but I watched your video and I'll give some anyway.
- Probably should have gone without the generic teaching song that played in between skits. I think it's been done too much by Smosh and many other YouTubers, sure the nine y()e)ar o l()ds won't notice but if you want to make content that you can look back on in a few years and say "yeah I'm proud of this" you may want to develop your own style. I know I copied WoWCrendor a lot, and I regret it despite the popularity it got me because I can't go back and look at any of my content on my old channel without wanting to die from embarrassment. Just a little suggestion, always try to improve and strive to evolve yourself into something different to avoid the same fate I guess.
-So at first I thought the video was going to be a "what people think it's like / what it's really like" kind of video (even though you forgot to add the "what people think it's like" title card on the ro-sports skit) but then it changed to a straight up hyperbolization (<- not a word) of the Roleplayer sub, and then flipped back to the "what people think it's like / what it's really like" style.. Which is fine, I guess but maybe next time stick to one direction style when you're writing the script because it felt sloppy when you kept switching back and forth.
-Anyway aside from those two previous paragraphs, I guess you could improve on your camera work because it feels really lazy. Maybe you didn't care and you're just being ironic? Either way looks sloppy.
Just some thoughts I had. I'm sick and have free time.
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| 05 Feb 2017 12:49 AM |
How about S&I
learn how to spoken |
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| 05 Feb 2017 12:49 AM |
How about S&I?
learn how to spoken |
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| 05 Feb 2017 11:13 AM |
VCR really isn't accurate at all honestly
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joeani
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| 05 Feb 2017 02:15 PM |
VCR should of had been a dead wasteland or graveyard.
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RoScripts
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| Joined: 27 Oct 2012 |
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| 05 Feb 2017 06:14 PM |
@phire
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@joe
every single one of the subforums i made the vid about is dead
it wouldnt be an entertaining video if i just put an empty classroom in all the subforums |
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RoScripts
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| Joined: 27 Oct 2012 |
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| 05 Feb 2017 06:15 PM |
@epik
atleast its more accurate that any of ur vids XDDDDDDDDDDD |
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| 05 Feb 2017 07:27 PM |
wow so many people i adore in this
gut wrenching |
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| 05 Feb 2017 07:28 PM |
u should not be talking ATR they will raid this topic if you do
gut wrenching |
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RoScripts
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| Joined: 27 Oct 2012 |
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| 06 Feb 2017 01:09 PM |
| even more the reason to do so |
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