cwis22
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| 22 Jan 2017 05:27 PM |
| I recently finished, my game, Combat Chaos, and I need some constructive criticism on things to improve. Link is: https://www.roblox.com/games/404370468/Combat-Chaos |
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| 22 Jan 2017 06:14 PM |
Put some effort into your game.
$sig = "PM me if you want me to script a game!" |
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| 22 Jan 2017 07:24 PM |
Dont use free models.
Play my game: https://www.roblox.com/games/585135781/MiniRacers-Alpha-0-9-7-Gamepass
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cwis22
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| 22 Jan 2017 07:28 PM |
| The only free model I used was the spawn... everything else was modeled and scripted by me. |
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| 22 Jan 2017 07:33 PM |
| ^^^ What about the weapons? |
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cwis22
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| 22 Jan 2017 08:13 PM |
| I suppose those are free models, but at least I stuck with the classics. |
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| 22 Jan 2017 08:55 PM |
Allow no gear for the game (so I wont be able to use stuff I bought with R$) Don't immediately provoke users to use the R$ shop and please, for the love of god, remove that shop entirely. It's too expensive for 90% of people. I suggest making your own gear for the game. Put a little more effort into the trees (use CFrame and such) Add a mute button for the music (incase someone wants to use their own music)
Aside from all that, this is a very simple deathmatch game. I could literally replicate it in an hour. I recommend adding a levels system and a way to make the player's character unique (whether its rare clothing or guns...). These are ways to make people keep playing your games. You can make it so that they can buy the currency needed to get these rare items, but yeah.. this is what most games do for $$. Try looking at Mad Paintball 2. Not the best example but still.
Overall, it needs to be more engaging to attract a bigger playerbase. Learn to script here, by the way. wiki.roblox.com
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cwis22
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