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| 30 Dec 2016 05:55 PM |
Hello before I start this story i would like to say this story is based off a visit to the library where people were asking me if i was just there so lets get started!.
When ever I went to a field trip at school or go to the library someone working there would always ask me if I had just been there or had a twin, I always said no but they continued every time i came back.I never saw them but i think they saw me.I have one memory of going into a library with my class and seeing a girl with the same hair as me walk out but i didn't see her face,after we walked in the library the lady at the desk asked me "Did you forget something sweetie?" i responded "No ,i just got here with my class"She gave me a confused look like i was crazy and continued by saying "But you were just in here you just left.. , oh you must be a twin!" That sentence gave me an un-easy feeling in my stomach as i asked her "I'm not a twin.."And stopped talking as i turned around and saw a girl who looked like me ,my jaw dropped i was about to ask her a question but as soon as she saw me looking at her she ran.I knew then she had been following me, years past after that day i never saw her but i thought and thought about who she could be , i always had a sinking feeling in my stomach like she was watching me but i never saw her.Then one day i was walking down the in the corner of my eye i saw her she saw me she ran up to me and told me to follow her , because I'm more of a brave person I followed her.We were in a dark ally when I asked "What do you wanna..."Before i could finish she put her hand over my mouth and i felt tired.I woke up in a room with papers the same paper I'm writing on ,please someone find thi........................................................
Thanks so much for reading and tell me if you want to hear more I'm also open to constructive criticism you may have☺. |
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| 30 Dec 2016 05:57 PM |
not bad
but not scary
more like a mystery thing |
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| 03 Jan 2017 07:28 AM |
| Thanks for taking the time to read it! |
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| 03 Jan 2017 07:28 AM |
that is one late response
I only upload low quality board game rips. |
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| 07 Jan 2017 08:54 PM |
| I'm confused on what that means. |
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| 07 Jan 2017 08:55 PM |
not that scary
but whatever, interesting read |
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Sediao
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Zookah
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| 07 Jan 2017 09:03 PM |
zzz
r+://324615033 zuka booga |
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The_OTer
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| 07 Jan 2017 09:04 PM |
| is this real? mildly creepy though |
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| 08 Jan 2017 01:39 PM |
| Thanks for the grammar tips and not real but based on real |
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| 08 Jan 2017 01:41 PM |
| Could you tell me the real story it was based on? Or is the real story not creepy enough, tell it if you can. |
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| 22 Jan 2017 05:56 PM |
| Okay I'll write the real one it happend a while ago |
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wizzain
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| 22 Jan 2017 06:20 PM |
| i though this was gonna be ########## |
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| 23 Feb 2017 03:53 PM |
| I tried to keep it a bit less scary for ### younger kids if you want a real scary one i'll make one |
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