AXEditor
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:43 PM |
IMPORTANT: Constructive criticism does not mean hate. Instead of giving me a dislike, tell me what is wrong and give me a chance to improve. That's right! I'm looking for people to tell me what's WRONG with my game so I can improve it in the nearest update! Bugs, issues, annoying moments, tell me all and i'll try to solve them! Game: https://www.roblox.com/games/605325000/Ahh-The-Floor-Is-Lava Have a good day! |
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XBeam4K
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:44 PM |
Eh, not bad I would recommend more detailing
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AXEditor
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:55 PM |
eh not the most fun
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:56 PM |
| Unbeatable, a little more detail? |
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Pxlarr
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:56 PM |
add music
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| 11 Jan 2017 04:57 PM |
it needs to details use solid modeling to make some cool objects
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| 11 Jan 2017 05:04 PM |
Okay, so here's what I think.
As of right now it doesn't look very impressive. It's simple, but not the charming sort of simple if you get what I'm saying here. Here's what I would recommend adding.
Everything kinda seems cluttered, and just imagine a full server in that tiny lobby. Try making it bigger and adding decorations that fit the theme of your game.
I would personally perfer a quicker, less dramatic way to get from Obby to Obby. You die in one hit, and you respawn in the lobby everytime. Waiting for the dang teleporter to heat up and launch you back really breaks the immersion.
Try some variety, not just generic lava obby #447,197. Not every level should have lava, how about some original concepts and obstacles? Different levels should have different themes to them so it doesn't just feel like you're just playing the same level over and over again with slightly different gameplay.
The lava is buggy. Sometimes I'll land right on a safe platform and I'll die anyways. It could be my hats, and if that's the case, add something so hats don't get you killed when you clearly did everything right!
Finally, this is just a preference, add some music. A different song for a different stage, and how about a lobby theme? My friend Doggy recently found out how to make Local Music, Aka, a different song that plays when you enter a level. So feel free to ask him if you're not sure how to add something like that.
That's all. :P |
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