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scatteredmemories is not online. scatteredmemories
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10 Jan 2017 05:46 PM
Jennifer #18

The Many Types of Changes


There are many types of changes. They could be linked to time, natural or man-made, it can be positive or negative, it can be perceived as orderly or random- it’s everywhere! There are changes happening all around us. The clock might have been positioned on the right wall yesterday, and today it’s positioned on the left wall! There’s even change in our literature.


Think about The Wind In the Willows by Kenneth Grahame. Toad loses “his” car. Afterwards, he goes to jail. Think about how negatively this affected him! Change can be positive or negative depending on the change. Suddenly, he gets freed! I think that’s positive.


Don’t forget about The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett! This tale displays many positive changes, such as Colin’s first steps. He never thought he could walk. He thought he would decease! He walked! He says in response to Dr. Craven’s visit: “He won’t get Misselthwaite at all not that I’m not going to die.” Isn’t that positive? He knew he wouldn’t die! To add on, Mr. Craven came home to see his son walk. That’s a great change! It led to a happy ending.


The Weaving of a Dream by Marilee Heyer represents many man-made and natural changes. One piece of evidence that shows this is when the fairy weaves herself into the quilt. It was her choice. It was a man-made change, unlike the mother’s quilt turning into a very real exquisite world. The eldest brothers getting some money? Their choice- just like them becoming poor beggars. If they wouldn’t have spent that money, they would still be rich.


The Japanese folktale “The Old Man and His Affectionate Son” allows people to reflect on some very orderly changes. The man becomes old. What’s next? He’s outlawed! When he becomes outlawed, the son refuses to leave his side. Since the son refuses to leave his side, the old man helps him win the competition! When the boy admits to cheating in tears, the competition holder decided that it was time to change. Elders were no longer outlawed. It all goes in a sequenced order.


So many changes that go with so many stories! There are positive and negative changes, as reflected through The Wind and the Willows and The Secret Garden. There are also changes that could be either natural or made by humans, as made manifest through The Weaving of a Dream, such as the fairy weaving herself into the old mother’s quilt. To add on, “The Old Man and His Affectionate Son” views sequenced changes. There are many types of changes- and they aren’t limited to the location of clocks.

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its so bad im screaming


"𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘸𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦!"
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10 Jan 2017 05:47 PM
but your still in fourth grade :o
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10 Jan 2017 05:47 PM
Ava is that you???


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10 Jan 2017 05:47 PM
i assume you had to do this 400 word paper yesterday and it was due today
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10 Jan 2017 05:48 PM
i have an essay i wrote on word in grade 1 its still on my school archive, it was "what i was going to be for halloween" and we had to list what the costume had







"Spray Paint 2 Defend frum senyors"
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10 Jan 2017 05:48 PM
"i assume you had to do this 400 word paper yesterday and it was due today"
i wsa 10 years old when i wrote this stop bullying me


"𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘸𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦!"
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10 Jan 2017 05:52 PM
"10 year old confirmed"
reported for bullying


"𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘸𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦!"
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10 Jan 2017 05:53 PM
Jennifer #18

The Many Types of Changes


There are many types of changes. They could be linked to time, natural or man-made, it can be positive or negative, it can be perceived as orderly or random- it’s everywhere! There are changes happening all around us. The clock might have been positioned on the right wall yesterday, and today it’s positioned on the left wall! There’s even change in our literature.


Think about The Wind In the Willows by Kenneth Grahame. Toad loses “his” car. Afterward, he goes to jail. Think about how negatively this affected him! Change can be positive or negative depending on the change. Suddenly, he gets freed! I think that’s positive.


Don’t forget about The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett! This tale displays many positive changes, such as Colin’s first steps. He never thought he could walk. He thought he would decease! He walked! He says in response to Dr. Craven’s visit: “He won’t get Misselthwaite at all not that I’m not going to die.” Isn’t that positive? He knew he wouldn’t die! To add on, Mr. Craven came home to see his son walk. That’s a great change! It led to a happy ending.


The Weaving of a Dream by Marilee Heyer represents many man-made and natural changes. One piece of evidence that shows this is when the fairy weaves herself into the quilt. It was her choice. It was a man-made change, unlike the mother’s quilt turning into a very real exquisite world. The eldest brothers getting some money? Their choice- just like them becoming poor beggars. If they wouldn’t have spent that money, they would still be rich.


The Japanese folktale “The Old Man and His Affectionate Son” allows people to reflect on some very orderly changes. The man becomes old. What’s next? He’s outlawed! When he becomes outlawed, the son refuses to leave his side. Since the son refuses to leave his side, the old man helps him win the competition! When the boy admits to cheating in tears, the competition holder decided that it was time to change. Elders were no longer outlawed. It all goes in a sequenced order.


So many changes that go with so many stories! There are positive and negative changes, as reflected through The Wind and the Willows and The Secret Garden. There are also changes that could be either natural or made by humans, as made manifest through The Weaving of a Dream, such as a fairy weaving herself into the old mother’s quilt. To add on, “The Old Man and His Affectionate Son” views sequenced changes. There are many types of changes- and they aren’t limited to the location of clocks.

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It's so bad, I'm screaming.


"𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘸𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦!"

SPELLING ERRORS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My mom would DESTROY me, if I had that many spelling errors in fourth grade. This is unacceptable!!!!



Best Wishes, General.
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10 Jan 2017 05:53 PM
"reported for bullying"

being rattled today are we
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casarela is not online. casarela
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10 Jan 2017 05:56 PM
On my state test essay I wrote my name on the paper, erased it, flipped it over and wrote my name in giant letters in kindergarten.
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