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| 06 Jan 2017 08:53 PM |
Hi! My name is WaterAidan18866 and I am running for HoR. You might know me from LV,DC or maybe even we have the same job. But I am just like YOU,the American people who want change.
Voice
Must politicians lie straight to your face and say "I will give the people a voice" If I become elected,I will actually DO it. If anyone knows me(as a ambassador to Grenada) I ask people for suggestions to build a better relationship with that ro nation.
NUSA Economy/Jobs
There is so much potential for NUSA,but some of our politicians don't even know what their doing,if elected,I will write bills that are pro business,which will help businesses and also help job growth. As a business owner our government doesn't help our businesses which is the reason why there is not a lot of businesses around.
Thank you so much for reading!
-US Ambassador to Grenada and Veteran of NUSM |
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Disn_Ize
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Danfly
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| 06 Jan 2017 09:09 PM |
| Within this article 7 times you don't put a space after a comma, making it grammatically incorrect. Also 'ro nation' is grammatically incorrect as ro isn't a word and it's an abbreviation of 'Reverse osmosis'. Meaning there must be a hyphen between the two words ro-nation, for it to be grammatically correct. |
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AK164
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| 06 Jan 2017 09:12 PM |
| Wtf, I understand you're freedom party but you stole my motto plus your grammar is horrid and you look like a nub. |
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