legoe22
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| 28 Dec 2016 01:20 AM |
Hi i made a yandere game basically a city Rolo play with a hand scripted ping pong table with score, joining and animation gui.
And Rp weapons, that do cool attack effects with a over 10K part hand made map.
https://www.roblox.com/games/580205001/Yandere-Life#!/game-instances
Constructive feed back only, Meaning if you took over 100 hours scripting and building a game would you like too hear this about your game? |
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cbsqueast
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| 28 Dec 2016 01:37 AM |
I know 100 is a big number and all, but 100 hours is only the equivalence of 4 days.
I don't even know what that last sentence means
Your game quality could be improved. A lot. Everything is so colorful that I don't even know what it is. I don't want to type out an entire nitpicking list of everything I find unattractive about your game
You're gonna clean your home in quicky, when you use your Schticky. |
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AecTalek
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| 28 Dec 2016 01:44 AM |
i don't understand how this took you '100 hours' you recorded yourself as you developed? did you know a lot of development also occurs outside of roblox studio? maybe it was even more than that you mean you just luckily struck on 100 hours and then stopped?
if i had spent 100 hours on something i'd be less scrutinizing on what other people have to say, because i'd be interested in improving since i put in time
but it doesn't seem like you put in time
so. |
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| 28 Dec 2016 02:26 AM |
Some developments like Firestone and other groups take weeks, if not months to complete.
I guess things are just different now || Add 23k || TheSerendipity |
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DarkWebs
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| 28 Dec 2016 12:40 PM |
| Guys come on don't put him down... He is new to developing let him achieve something that he thinks that he did really well. Don't put people down... He did a good job at least it could be a lot better but for him... it's not bad |
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legoe22
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| 28 Dec 2016 05:20 PM |
Remember this is a Rolo Play game(not combat themed) don't dislike this game if theres no rolo play games you like that have More of a Meep city rp theme.
Try comparing this too works in the same genre (Club Boats,Meep City,Other Yandere games.) and remember that thoses games had funding and more them 4 developers.
SO don't post a reply of any kind till you can first post a link of a game you like in this Genre.
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| 28 Dec 2016 05:23 PM |
100 hours of developing is too short for a average developer...
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take" -Wayne Gretzky |
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legoe22
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| 28 Dec 2016 05:24 PM |
cbsqueast this game is a game that was designed too have gender equality (Rare on roblox) a game that the players will be 50% male and 50% female. Alot of female players love rainbow and more colorful games
Just look at the games that have alot of female roblox players on them. Like Meep City.
so if your personal tastes are not for colorful games then your that other 50% of males C; or your a friend of one of the last commenter
else i am going too random friend request you jking. |
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chloealiz
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| 28 Dec 2016 05:50 PM |
| I'm female and all the colors makes me wanna barf because its so colorful, I don't see your point. |
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| 28 Dec 2016 06:18 PM |
| Well one hundred hours of work is pretty substantial and it is refreshing to see an enthusiastic developer so congratulations on that. I think if you keep working hard and keep on learning you will go far. That being said after playing this game I litterally have no understanding of anything that was happening. The graphics are mediocre at best, The map is remarkably small for a roleplay,and the game is void of content. I would move on to a different project but use this as an initial learning experience. If you put a large amount of work into a better concept who knows what you might accomplish. |
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| 28 Dec 2016 06:29 PM |
Not trying to be rude but judging by the thumbnail if it took you 100hrs to develop this then you are really really lazy. Even more than me!
Love breeds sacrifice... which in turn breeds hatred. Then you can know pain. |
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cbsqueast
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:02 PM |
Why are you even talking about genders now
I don't think houses that females live in are colorful and houses that males live in aren't. And females like colors that males like, too. And just because more female players play games more than male players doesn't mean that their gender is unbalanced. (I think that's your logic)
Also why would I be friends with the last posters doesn't make any sense at all
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AecTalek
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:03 PM |
" cbsqueast this game is a game that was designed too have gender equality (Rare on roblox) a game that the players will be 50% male and 50% female. Alot of female players love rainbow and more colorful games "
??? what? gender equality? roblox? what are you talking about? do you really think that 'gender equality' is a quantifiable thing? on roblox, as well? i think you may be too young to get into such things. it's a waste of time for adults, even more so for younger people. |
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cbsqueast
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:27 PM |
"Try comparing this too works in the same genre (Club Boats,Meep City,Other Yandere games.) and remember that thoses games had funding and more them 4 developers."
Wait, what? "(Club Boats,Meep City, Other Yandere Games.)" Are you saying that Meep City and Club Boates are yandere games? The definition of yandere is basically lovestruck. And I think that Club Boates was done by 2 people, and Meep City was as well. Uh, I guess you should just keep improving on making games. The scripts are good, but I don't know if they're free modeled or not
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:41 PM |
| I can make a game with over 10k parts in a days of work e.e |
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:44 PM |
| @Aec, he likes to pick arguments that he can never get himself out of. As well as many other forumers. |
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kaddad14
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| 28 Dec 2016 08:45 PM |
| I've spent about 100hours total in just making 1/80 of my game, which isn't even close to done. |
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legoe22
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| 29 Dec 2016 12:16 AM |
Dear kaddad14. I was just trying to think up a name for forum.
Dear LightFantom. I am a scripter and builder not a GFX master.
Dear cbsqueast. https://www.roblox.com/games/370731277/FREE-GIFT-MeepCity
So meep city had two people just for building one for scripting and a director that hired all the graph artists too make thumb nail etc so atleast 4 lol. @alexnewtron - Director and Programmer @TrainedDoorman - Creative Director @Celestaphone - Music Composer @HolidayPwner - Builder @KrixYaz - Furniture Builder
Also this is in the greater Rolo play genre meaning not killing rolo play based....
Dear all: I know i am not a expert developer, i just did this forum too share my work.
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FrankiePC
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| 29 Dec 2016 02:59 AM |
| Good start. You're the next generation of developers on Roblox, so don't feel too bad about the quality of your game. The effort will add up later. :) |
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tatabusa
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| 29 Dec 2016 03:23 AM |
| Can I hire you as builder? Just don't put too much colours though :) |
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doremn
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| 29 Dec 2016 03:47 AM |
some advise for you that ive learned in roblox
100 hours or developing a finished un-freemodelled game is like the lowest people have gone, its like saying you've done 100 hours of making a finished Marvel movie, which would look like some random youtube video.
dont ever, and i mean EVER. E.V.E.R. show your work until you know it looks like a front page worthy game, excluding tycoons, obbys and click baits.
you can show models and small stuff to ask for helps, no more no less
not hating, just preventing more mistakes
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ShaCura
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| 29 Dec 2016 04:13 AM |
5/10
to much colors - u can Always work with with and textures the city is too tiny - <<< what Santa[Something i dont renember] do? or it is just a part that u can hold? Some of the 'grass' -espheres- are inside houses ,make he tinnier then it dont will happen
Yes i dont like roleplay games, but im not judging you map as what i like. the map could get some upgrades. And 100 of work is not realy something
24 hours = 1 day 48 hours = 2 days 72 hours = 3 days 96 hours = 4 days
100 hours = 4 days and 4 hors , 100 hours is not realy something.
srr for my bad english, hope i helped ~ShaCura
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legoe22
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| 29 Dec 2016 05:15 PM |
ShaCura, taht is very interresting math you have there are you trying too say most develops such as your self do 24 hours work on a game a day without sleeping or eating? with no breaks?
My math working on a game 4 hours a day(some one with school can't do more then 4 hours lol for you otaku's this may seem odd.) 1 days working 4 hours a day=4 hours 5 days working 4 hours a day=20 hours 10 days working 4 hours a day=40 hours 15 days working 4 hours a day=60 hours 20 days working 4 hours a day=80 hours 25 days working 4 hours a day=100 hours
so too say this forawrdly if i was a roblox admin that donated alot of robux i would get a better judgement from these fine developers.
I just hope that if i get famous i don't go warlike and do sniping posts to hurt peoples feels and go imperialist on forums as a game developer.
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