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| 21 Dec 2016 08:21 PM |
I need opinions so i can help fix the game
https://web.roblox.com/games/478395150/Reality-BETA |
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| 21 Dec 2016 08:32 PM |
| It's not bad, but It's EXTREMELY short and can be easily exploited because players are given a building tool. |
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| 21 Dec 2016 08:33 PM |
| dang it i didnt know you get a building tool thx for the help! |
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victor
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| 21 Dec 2016 08:36 PM |
| To be completely honest with you - lose the description. Players are more interested in games that are mysterious, and by giving them a short introduction in the description can lose that user's interest. If you want some sort of description, just talk about the game's key features; like what genre the game is and what the objective is. Don't plunge into a short story. It's all about player count when making a game, it won't ever become successful if only 3 people play it. |
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| 21 Dec 2016 08:44 PM |
description has grammar errors.
attempt to call girlfriend (a nil value) | (͠≖ ͜ʖ͠≖)👌 | nothin' like a good argument ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ |
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