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Re: I FINALLY WROTE THE NOTE (Edited Version)

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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:41 AM
I have feelings for you. I have liked you for quite a while now. I don't have the courage to tell you face to face. If you reject me, Can we please be friends? I will respect your answer fully. From: The male trombone player

Edits: 1. Changed "Emotions" to "Feelings"
2. Changed "Ever since i broke up" to "For quite a while now"
3. Removed the "I'd run off with hot cherry cheeks" line
4. Removed the dashes in face to face.
5. Flipped the positions of the courage line to the can we be friends line.
6. Fixed some spelling and handwriting mistakes
7. Some other crap.
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20 Dec 2016 01:43 AM
"I have feelings for you. I have liked you for quite a while now. I don't have the courage to tell you face to face. If you reject me, Can we please be friends? I will respect your answer fully. From: The male trombone player"

WAY BETTER DUDE.
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Qwazilla is not online. Qwazilla
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20 Dec 2016 01:43 AM
A lot better
Could say, "If you reject me, we can still be friends if you want" instead
Also adding your damn name

Other than that, aces bro
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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:44 AM
I dont really need to do any of that.

1. Changing the wording of the 4th line won't do anything
2. She will 100% know who the note is from by looking at F:TMTP
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SacredTears is not online. SacredTears
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20 Dec 2016 01:44 AM
I just don't like the "Can we please be friends part" makes ya sound desperate
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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:45 AM
Thats kinda the point
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Qwazilla is not online. Qwazilla
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20 Dec 2016 01:46 AM
"1. Changing the wording of the 4th line won't do anything"

But it will

"2. She will 100% know who the note is from by looking at F:TMTP"

May be true but still seems kinda odd

These aren't huge deals though
As long as you don't send her that past version
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20 Dec 2016 01:46 AM
this is much better go get her dude


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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:47 AM
btw on the envelope it says

"To

Missy"

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20 Dec 2016 01:47 AM
"I just don't like the "Can we please be friends part" makes ya sound desperate"

there's a fine line to toe here, and you may want to compromise and say "If not, can we stay friends?" as that doesn't make you look too casual nor too desperate while still respecting her decision.
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20 Dec 2016 01:47 AM
sounds a bit too choppy but it gets the point across

nice
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Stickyry is not online. Stickyry
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20 Dec 2016 01:48 AM
just write dear, her name
then at the end from, your name

dont complicate it


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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:51 AM
Why exactly does it matter when i say (My Name Here Shown On My Profile Lmfao) or "TMTB"
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20 Dec 2016 01:51 AM
if u wanna b sincere youll follow my advice smh


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Qwazilla is not online. Qwazilla
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20 Dec 2016 01:52 AM
Just seems odd
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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:53 AM
:/ okay

And whats the difference between "If you reject me, Can we please still be friends?" and "If you reject me, We can still be friends if you want"
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Aetricity is not online. Aetricity
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20 Dec 2016 01:53 AM
its funny how theres a change log on something you want to send to a crush
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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:54 AM
Its funny how you find that funny. This is serious.
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SacredTears is not online. SacredTears
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20 Dec 2016 01:54 AM
"We can still be friends if you want"


no I don't like that sentence at all don't write it
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20 Dec 2016 01:55 AM
imagine if she just says 'who are you?' after all this lmao


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SacredTears is not online. SacredTears
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20 Dec 2016 01:55 AM
das sad I would cri with OP
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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:56 AM
@stick

She knows me, Im her friend, She sits beside me in band class every day and we play trombone. There are like 4 females and 1 male.
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Qwazilla is not online. Qwazilla
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20 Dec 2016 01:57 AM
"And whats the difference between"

I just think the former sounds desperate
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Stickyry is not online. Stickyry
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20 Dec 2016 01:58 AM
o gl wt her ig u seem weird tho the way ur writing this and stuff i wouldnt be surprised if she said no


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BETIMAWESOME is not online. BETIMAWESOME
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20 Dec 2016 01:58 AM
"I think the former sounds desperate"

Thats the point.. kinda.

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