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BloxMaster136 is not online. BloxMaster136
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14 Dec 2016 01:19 AM
I put something I wrote on Wattpad for the first time. I'm rather doing that to "test the waters" and see if the place is approrpiate for my bigger projects.
Anyway, I'd really, really appreciate if some of you could take a look at it and maybe post some comments of short reviews of it.

Link: http*s:*//ww*w.*wat*tpad.*com/sto*ry/92881*255-board-meeting

Remove *'s.

Thanks a lot in advance, I really appreciate it!
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After Tela Mon's? Na!
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A bit rushed but a perfect script for a short film/movie.
Have you considered taking up grammar classes?
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@Zen
What is that supposed to mean?
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It's not bad at all but needs some work.


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Good


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@Official
Thanks!
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