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| 14 Dec 2016 01:19 AM |
I put something I wrote on Wattpad for the first time. I'm rather doing that to "test the waters" and see if the place is approrpiate for my bigger projects. Anyway, I'd really, really appreciate if some of you could take a look at it and maybe post some comments of short reviews of it.
Link: http*s:*//ww*w.*wat*tpad.*com/sto*ry/92881*255-board-meeting
Remove *'s.
Thanks a lot in advance, I really appreciate it! |
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| 14 Dec 2016 01:35 AM |
A bit rushed but a perfect script for a short film/movie. Have you considered taking up grammar classes? |
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| 14 Dec 2016 01:39 AM |
@Zen What is that supposed to mean? |
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| 14 Dec 2016 01:57 AM |
It's not bad at all but needs some work.
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| 14 Dec 2016 03:37 AM |
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| 14 Dec 2016 03:39 AM |
| big ###### #### in my mouth mmmm yeah spray that lactation in my mouthhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yeah back it up nice #### me ### ### ###### ##### |
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