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| 13 Dec 2016 11:23 AM |
I put something I wrote on Wattpad for the first time. I'm rather doing that to "test the waters" and see if the place is approrpiate for my bigger projects. Anyway, I'd really, really appreciate if some of you could take a look at it and maybe post some comments of short reviews of it.
Link: http*s:*//ww*w.*wat*tpad.*com/sto*ry/92881*255-board-meeting
Remove the *'s.
Thanks a lot in advance, I really appreciate it! |
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| 13 Dec 2016 02:03 PM |
| I will read it and give you feedback. |
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| 13 Dec 2016 02:11 PM |
| aside from a couple misplaced words and missing commas, i dont think it is bad. |
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