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| 11 Dec 2016 05:07 PM |
Hey, I'm kinda trying to make a YouTube channel... I wasn't very impressed with my first vid... Any Comments or tips??
https://youtube.com/watch?v=IEHDEW4nX3k |
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trizrock
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| 11 Dec 2016 05:31 PM |
| lmao the only time I've ever laughed at something triz said |
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| 11 Dec 2016 06:30 PM |
Lol sorry I'll give you some advice
Channel Name: Your name is kind meh. I hate when people throw the word "Plays" on the end of things. I think honestly it'd be better if it was just "SongBreeze". No need for the "Roblox & More". It looks tacky.
Description: This is not very important but maybe try describe what happens in the video rather than just a certain scene and maybe use the description to credit musicians whose work you use in the video and maybe to link the game that you're playing.
Profile Picture: Work on a new profile picture because it looks awful lol. Was excepting an absolutely horrible video based on that picture alone because it looks like a roblox screenshot so that's the amount of effort that I expected was being put into your video.
Channel Banner: Needs work but it's w/e not a big deal
Now for the actual video itself: Pros: Nice voice, Good mic, music made quiet parts slightly more interesting, Decent video quality and framerate Cons: Music was slightly too loud, Commentary was monotonous at times and you have too much time where there is no commentary at all. The clips shown are not always interesting.
In my opinion, I would record longer videos and then just edit out anything that's silent or uninteresting. Talk more about the game than about yourself and makes things interesting. Get hyped up! And if doing duo commentaries with friends and stuff helps you get into the game more, then do it! Try to take like an hour or more of footage and compact it into an action packed interesting 8-10 minute video. It's a challenge but I do believe that's truly a good way you can learn to only select the most interesting clips. Also a sidenote, try to be more unique as far as what the basis of your video is. There's not a whole lot of appeal to just watching someone play a game and talking about it. Commentaries and lets plays died awhile ago and right now it's important to keep everything action packed and interesting and to develop a connection with the video maker and friends. If it helps to make an objective for the video at the beginning and try to accomplish that in the recording, then do it. It doesn't have to be anything major but just make it seem like the video has some sort of structure.
You can do it, I believe in you :)
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| 11 Dec 2016 06:39 PM |
| Thanks for the tips man!! Actually am very inspired!!! I'll change my channel name!! Description Definitely I forgot actually :) Now channel picture... I am not Very good at thumbnails but I'll try my best!! Thanks again!!! |
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| 12 Dec 2016 07:49 PM |
For starters you're using your real voice which is great since not much robloxians do that. ( They use computer voice or text which stinks.)
The background music is cool. ( Might want to put the music you used in the description so the video doesnt get taken down.)
Here's some advice
Cut out the some of the parts where it's just you waiting in the lobby or walking around the map.
Add some effects if you want it to be funny. (Like PewDiePie or Markiplier)
Other than that it's great so far! |
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SoundGod
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| 13 Dec 2016 12:53 AM |
Go back to the drawing board, also advertising your first video is just a facepalm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DZm41SCMsQ&t |
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Ianafle
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| 13 Dec 2016 04:29 AM |
| Try doing SOmething That people Like or Might Wanna do so Show Tutorials or do challenges with your friends or some type of Shout out to subscribers. |
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| 14 Dec 2016 10:26 AM |
... well as someone whos started up this year, i shall pass the following advice, the first 10-20 videos for me, where less about making "good videos" and where more about "learning my own style", learning what i wanted the audience to get from my content and ultimatly learning how to do reasonable editing. Yes i wanted to them to be "good" but it was lower on my priority list. learning and developing new skills where my highest priority.
GermRage https://www.youtube.com/germrage |
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| 14 Dec 2016 11:29 AM |
| Thanks guys for the tips 😀 I'm working on my next vid experimenting on it and stuff!!! Trying to figure out ways to make it better!! But it's coming on really slow... Thanks!!! I will definitely use every tip I get 😄 |
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| 14 Dec 2016 11:40 AM |
| its ok, but the intro is quite generic |
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